The world background is 5/5 on the account that DC has wide multiverse irrespective of the small chapters available. The Updating stability is 5/5, the same goes for Story development, since it's still too early to tell considering the few chapters. The problem comes from the character design and writing quality which is 1/5 and 3/5 respectively. I understand that writing is hard, but there are some things that should be avoided especially for an author that has written multiple books that are good compared to this in my opinion. Now the grammar is not why the writing quality is low, actually the grammar is adequate, so is the dialogue, paragraph spacing and so on which is actually why it's up to 3/5. The problem comes from the character design which lowers the writing quality. The MC was stated to be an adult with a job before he died. I'm also assuming he had a pretty normal childhood since it wasn't stated otherwise. The problem stems from the fact that despite all this, the MC still acts like a child despite his origin. It has always been a sore spot for me when the Isekai'd MC is so accepting of his new parents. I don't mean disrespecting them, cause that's stupid, but putting them in the same pedestal as his original parents, especially when he had a good childhood. If it was a bad childhood then that's different. But that I can tolerate, what I can't phantom is the childish behavior of the MC despite him commenting multiple times that he was an adult in his previous life. He acts like he's starved for affection or something. Well this my opinion on the novel, honestly I don't think I can go on, maybe the MC will get better later on, but I think that first impressions matter.
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LIKEI really can't blast your review. I find it enlightening. Yes, for Isekai'd Characters that had a good life, family, were fairly accomplished in life or knew their purpose, acting like a kid would be a little weird EVEN taking into account they're a toddler and it's a new life. However, Jon or rather Jeff had a worthless life filled with regrets. He took this second chance at living as a fresh start. He didn't have the kind of childhood that let him be a child. But this time, with loving parents...he finally has a chance to be a kid.
Hmm..... well the chapters I read never mentioned or implied that his childhood was bad though. It sounded like his previous life was normal, there wasn't anything stating otherwise.
Saintbarbido:I really can't blast your review. I find it enlightening. Yes, for Isekai'd Characters that had a good life, family, were fairly accomplished in life or knew their purpose, acting like a kid would be a little weird EVEN taking into account they're a toddler and it's a new life. However, Jon or rather Jeff had a worthless life filled with regrets. He took this second chance at living as a fresh start. He didn't have the kind of childhood that let him be a child. But this time, with loving parents...he finally has a chance to be a kid.
I didn't see any of this implied in the first few chapters. It just feels like he said fuck his previous parents and decided that the comic books characters are his new parents
Saintbarbido:I really can't blast your review. I find it enlightening. Yes, for Isekai'd Characters that had a good life, family, were fairly accomplished in life or knew their purpose, acting like a kid would be a little weird EVEN taking into account they're a toddler and it's a new life. However, Jon or rather Jeff had a worthless life filled with regrets. He took this second chance at living as a fresh start. He didn't have the kind of childhood that let him be a child. But this time, with loving parents...he finally has a chance to be a kid.