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Project_PaladinLv45mth
2024-09-21 15:38

This is a really good story, we have a good balance between plot and action, the characters have meaningful interactions and the idea behind this is just great, on top of that the system is only there to give power through the struggles and growth of the Mc not to give missions or control him.

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GzeroX
GzeroXLv4

there is a severe lack of flow. 'the bigger problem was his memories. his memories...' it sounds so broken, if he just said 'they' then it was clear it means the previously mentioned memories. go read the first chapter and cound how many times he opens with 'he or his...' its more of a summeration then a story. and now im kinda interested why you think this is so good. cause to me even the plot is shaky, he killed his attackers so how did hydra learn about his ability?

GzeroX
GzeroXLv4

nvm author is an idiot. this is more swiss cheese than plot

NovelLoversHeaven1
NovelLoversHeaven1Lv3

I haven't started reading yet. QUESTION: is the trauma of the previous body owner passed over? I want to know if its a proper revenge story where mc will kill all his enemies(including random grunts) or just the leaders. QUESTION 2: is mc an idiot or a genius?

Project_Paladin
Project_PaladinLv4

He gets the memories and has to suffer as himself so yes, a proper revenge story

NovelLoversHeaven1:I haven't started reading yet. QUESTION: is the trauma of the previous body owner passed over? I want to know if its a proper revenge story where mc will kill all his enemies(including random grunts) or just the leaders. QUESTION 2: is mc an idiot or a genius?
Project_Paladin
Project_PaladinLv4

Answer to the second question: He is neither

NovelLoversHeaven1:I haven't started reading yet. QUESTION: is the trauma of the previous body owner passed over? I want to know if its a proper revenge story where mc will kill all his enemies(including random grunts) or just the leaders. QUESTION 2: is mc an idiot or a genius?
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