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who eats dinner at 9? 0_o
a bit weird to serve wine not only at a orphanage but a barbeque, who drinks wine with ribbs
i am somewhat confused about these capital letters, is it shouting? i think it would be better with an exclamation mark
i like pizza with ham and pineapple but this is some next lvl man
you are nailing their characters quite well even if what max says sometimes is total nonsense. though if you wanna go harem you should build up some flirting between max and caroline
tbh the best part of this story is the sensei part. the politics are bs the fights are bs danzo is bs oh and his skills are bs as well. just look what minato could do with fuinjutsu and he didnt pull off half the bs your mc does
if they all went off that second why does it take 20 seconds
his clone thinks faster then the real one?
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calm and deliberate? i think you forgot precise