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  • scyfly
    scyfly1d
    Replied to Silverfang

    it isnt even your story.... original author is on fanfic

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    Solo Arc
    Anime & Comics · Silverfang
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  • scyfly
    scyfly1d
    Commented

    yes use a spell that rips the gun forward, in no way accidentally making it go off. why not just petrify or stun him?

    Harry quickly burst into action as his wand appeared in his hand and he fired off a disarming spell followed by a summoning spell before the man could react. Since Harry moved it had taken one second for the gun to fly out the man's hand and two more seconds for it to fly into Harry's free hand. The man didn't even get a chance to protest as Harry had quickly hit him with two more spells, the first being a body bind that caused his legs to snap together as his arms snapped to his side while also causing him to lose the ability to move his body.
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    Harry Potter: The Wizarding Avenger
    Book&Literature · Lotus_Lover
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  • scyfly
    scyfly1d
    Commented

    why does this sound like a jedi doing their mind trick?

    "Fine," Harry said calmly as he raised his hands in the air. "I am not going to do anything crazy, I am going to cooperate." Harry said as he slowly took a few steps forward.
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    Harry Potter: The Wizarding Avenger
    Book&Literature · Lotus_Lover
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  • scyfly
    scyfly1d
    Commented

    these voices are really cringe, perhaps add the tag angst?

    "Aw, ickle wickle Potter wants to go sleep." A female voice cooed. "Come on Potter, let me take care of you." The voice whispered before it was replaced by loud cackling that rang through his ears.
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    Harry Potter: The Wizarding Avenger
    Book&Literature · Lotus_Lover
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  • scyfly
    scyfly1d
    Commented

    because harry does not need money to eat this month?

    "I am good...um my mother wanted me to tell you that she's will be busy the next collection date so you can pay this months rent with next months."
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    Harry Potter: The Wizarding Avenger
    Book&Literature · Lotus_Lover
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  • scyfly
    scyfly1d
    Commented

    this is all over the place. it can be ignored but if you cant use magic to hide from muggles but can apparate one the first try without a single lesson then im gonna assume the whole story runs on zero logic with a focus on unexpected wow factors

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Arrival
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    Harry Potter: A New Battlefield
    Book&Literature · FantasyFusionForge
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  • scyfly
    scyfly1d
    Commented

    but it uses the same alphabet? you mean grammar

    Another month passes as Eragon continues his training at the hands of his father. Brom has been teaching Eragon the alphabet, so to speak, of the ancient language. Even with a month's tutorage, Eragon cannot get a full grasp of its intricacies. At most he can figure out specific words if he studies enough. 
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    RE: Eragon
    Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
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  • scyfly
    scyfly1d
    Commented

    yes and brom is such a lovable fellow

    The two continue to talk well into the night. Sharing stories and enjoying each other's company. The pang of loneliness in Eragon's heart fades as he finally has a family. His previous life as Sam had no blood relative ever contact or care about him in the slightest. 
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    RE: Eragon
    Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
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  • scyfly
    scyfly1d
    Commented

    you think a medieval village has rugs? at best they have a bear pelt which would be a ridiculous expendure for leaving on the floor

    Eragon swiftly throws the bottle down, shattering it on the floor. Its contents stain the rug they're standing on. "NO… I deserve to know. You think I wouldn't find out? Do you think I'm stupid? I know that you're my father. I've known for over three months. I was hoping that by talking to you all this time you might open up to me by yourself. Instead I get a drunkard without the balls to acknowledge his own son." 
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    RE: Eragon
    Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
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  • scyfly
    scyfly1d
    Commented

    that is sure some emotional attachment for a self insert withiut the memories of eragon

    Eragon runs out of breath, tears streaming down his face as well while the two continue to embrace each other. Brom hugs his son with a longing that he had buried in his heart and forgotten. 
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    RE: Eragon
    Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
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  • scyfly
    scyfly1d
    Commented

    this is the eddited version? 0_o

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: The Second Spaceship Descends on Kent Farm (Edited)
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    Superman's Saiyan little brother
    Anime & Comics · INIT
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  • scyfly
    scyfly5d
    Commented

    you mean those selfdestructing drones?

    I got it five years ago when Stark Expo was attacked by a bunch of Hammer Industries drones. They had these reactors built into them. I got it from a destroyed drone that Tony Stark destroyed in front of me.
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    I'm Peter Parker, so what?
    Anime & Comics · Ratnik
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  • scyfly
    scyfly5d
    Replied to Avarath123

    if his school has an electron microscope capable of seeing movement of atoms and houses dr connors lab, then it def has a gene sequenser. ofc in a normal world these kinds of things are heavily guarded cause it can turn the common cold into the next pandemic. but if thats the case buying the machine is riskier than stealing the 20mil pay for it

    For about thirty minutes I sat there racking my brain, but I couldn't figure out how to find money fast, a lot of money. And it looked like there was only one option left to me, and that was to commit a robbery. And to do it in such a way that they couldn't get on my trail, and most importantly, so that I wouldn't be caught by Gwen, who had been fighting with such people lately.
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    I'm Peter Parker, so what?
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  • scyfly
    scyfly5d
    Commented

    so he quantified what effect the a spider totem has on genes and how to make it more. all this on his home computer that would burn out doing some calculations? perhaps he used weirdly behaving atoms to change the faucet spouting water into creating gen mods? i give it even odds be specific or be vague, otherwise you end up with this

    And I needed all this to make me stronger than Gwen. Thanks to these manipulations, I would become two and a half times faster and stronger than Gwen purely physically, when she, judging by the data can lift up to twenty-five tons of weight. And with emotional leaps and bounds, even a hundred. Yes, and the speed when running she can develop about fifty kilometers per hour.
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    I'm Peter Parker, so what?
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  • scyfly
    scyfly5d
    Commented

    again this makes no sense

    - Yes, of course! - I nodded, and rushed to climb under the washbasin to shut off the water. I found the faucet pretty quickly, and after a few seconds the water stopped flowing.
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    I'm Peter Parker, so what?
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  • scyfly
    scyfly5d
    Commented

    this makes no sense

    Once inside, I took a drop of the spider toxin and began to look at it under the microscope. To my surprise, there were a lot of atoms mixed in there that behaved very strangely. This piqued my interest, so I loaded the toxin into a biochemical analyzer. The machine began its work, and in ten minutes I had a list of all kinds of compounds that were present in the toxin.
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    I'm Peter Parker, so what?
    Anime & Comics · Ratnik
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  • scyfly
    scyfly5d
    Commented

    nah its bones, hands down

    "No, I don't think you will. You can't keep isolating yourself like this. Tell you what, my adopted little sister and me get away from everyone else and just hang out several times a week. Why don't you join us tomorrow night to test the waters? If you don't want to stay, I'll accept it and won't bother you again about it."
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    HP: Harry Had Enough
    Book&Literature · Galaxy_Wonder
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  • scyfly
    scyfly5d
    Replied to Mysticwolf

    it would be the logical choice to leave. voldy would eventually break the statue of secrecy and then it suddenly is the ICW against voldy with kill orders for all his followers. so years to practice magic, an army of wizards behind him and legitimacy to kill them all, all for the low cost of britain. sounds like a good deal to me

    Albus blanched "You don't think he is turning dark do you?"
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    HP: Harry Had Enough
    Book&Literature · Galaxy_Wonder
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  • scyfly
    scyfly5d
    Commented

    ehh the elf bond was a little cheesy the rest was pretty good. too bad about hermione, she had her issues but until sixth year she was a truly loyal friend

    Ch 2 The Weight of Silence
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    HP: Harry Had Enough
    Book&Literature · Galaxy_Wonder
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  • scyfly
    scyfly5d
    Commented

    what? where did this came from. now if lex were the one to say this, a little more subtle making connections, that wouldve made sense

    "It's not who, but what. Look," Chloe said, pointing at various items. "They're meteorites! They cause people to mutate. I have to write, Clark. We need to call everyone: disease control, the FBI, the media. Oh, I'll be famous for this story!" Chloe said excitedly, not caring.
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    Smallville I am Clark Kent
    TV · daniel_vera
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