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or you know, since he can blood bend indefinitely he can just use that
cap it's Straciatella and hazelnut
So no compounding effect?
It's probably for the same reason everyone thought Hercule Poirot was French. Because they speak French in Belgium, specifically in Brussels which is where the food was created.
Specifically, "Pommes Frittes" right?
Because he spoke up without thinking
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I once again request Druid Training
It may be criticism, but it is a way to improve. The story is great, but realise that everything that anyone does can always be better. In this case, small details can contribute to a more concise idea of what is going on. I apologise for the lecture, but these comments, no matter how frustrating, are solely here to make the story that we enjoy and that you write better. Thanks for the work, and keep it up!