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Andetto
AndettoLv1015d
2025-01-15 13:09

I was honestly rooting for Mc and Sarah's relationship, and while I had problem with him being infatuated with other girls, I just thought,"He's a harem protagonist, what did I expect?" If I only knew... Well, I really liked Sarah's and Adrian's character but this is it for me. Really hoped the story wouldn't take the direction it took but oh well... Hated the mc though. The main character acted like an Chinese novel mc who had reason for acting like it. Accepting the system as if it was natural, shooting someone but not feeling any guilt, having interest in other girls while having Sarah and last but not least being petty and somewhat violent with enemies. In a normal webnovel, any of above traits would be seen as weird but see it with the lens of CN and all these trait make sense. And advertising it as 'chinese novel but better' doesn't help either...

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TLDR: Its a great book thats written well, but fair warning, the main character is a psychopath (like actually, not slang). I am writing this review for 2 reasons; One: The book is very good, and deserves the recognition, although I will hold off from writing a more in depth review currently due to the story still being in its early stages (chapters 1-100 feel like the prologue, and while it has been very enjoyable it definitely seems like the gloves have just been removed, and shits about to go down in the best way). And reason two is a disagreement with some reviews I've seen, who are claiming that the book springs this darker tone on the reader out of nowhere. Not to be rude, but are you guys reading the same book that I am? His extreme levels of controlling behavior, possessiveness, and calculating mind popping up through the entire beginning of the story have been basically broadcasting this change on a huge neon sign for most of the book. It was obvious to me that he was like this even around chapter 40. it's well foreshadowed. I think you guys are all just too used to normal system books on here. My main issue was probably the situation in chapter 92-95... that whole breaking and entering thing didnt really match what he has shown, but in my head im kinda treating it as an mental breakdown kinda thing, hopefully one he doesnt make often, as there is a difference between enjoying that sort of stuff and doing whats "Necessary". With that being said I think the author has done a very good job, the System is very unique and interesting (and as a bonus note, my main gripe with the system has been addressed in the later chapters, that being the options always had only one actually viable option, the others were just significantally worse, which I very much like, thank you author.), and the main character seems to be a psychopath that is written correctly and its very interesting to read.

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