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Haze_Lv45mth
2024-09-17 12:23

It’s decent my only two issues are most of the mcs behavior so far is him acting like a autistic kid biting his mom and stuff and it’s not to seem like a regular kid because he’s not he’s just mental. My other issue was him wanting to got back to his world that just ruined any sense of immersion, for me at least it makes any actions he makes in the world seem meaningless if he’s leaving. Grammer is good.

Naruto: Uninterested Uchiha

Hurt_Mee
3.6
35 Chs

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SkaviouzLv14

I feel it's realistic that someone wants to leave the world than just bend over and accept the new life. It's one thing to choose the ninja world and then be reborn there, and it's another thing to feel like you were forced to be reborn there. Plus, he was a married dude in his forties with a toddler at home. He feels like he lost something important and his family needs him.

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SkaviouzLv14

I'd like to point out that I disagree with some of the other reviews; such as people complaining about the MC being weak or pathetic, because one of the tags for the story is weak to strong... I'd recommend the author to think about adding the dark tag. Like others have said or implied, it's easy to empathize with the MC and his choices and actions are understandable from his point of view. I do feel there are some lost opportunities, but not all characters are perfect and make the most efficient choices. Plus even if he didn't kill a certain girl who could have become a subordinate, it would have also required a ton of effort. And let's be real, now that I think about it again, he wasn't at the stage or point in his life that he could even save himself, let alone others. I guess I just wish dark stories were less dark, and yet I like reading dark stories just as much as wish fulfillment. Thanks to the author for writing, the occasional mass releases, replying to our comments, and being active.

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Blake_LangtonLv15

Honestly not worth reading. Mc is straight up pathetic, weak as shit and doesn’t bother putting any effort in and continuously gets bullied by an old man. Mc is so useless he should honestly just kill himself and get the story over with

5mth
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belesa_femininaLv1

I don't know what happened to the MC but he has no attachment to anyone, apparently he hates Kushina for no reason. If there's someone who likes an edgy protagonist, maybe they'll like it.

5mth
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AKASHIIIiLv3

I like the somewhat gloomy and realistic atmosphere of this work. I rarely see such works. ЪьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъЪьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъьъ

6mth
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Sundar_VijayLv4

I think this is the first review I'm writing so let me keep it short and sweet. I think this will be the only story where you can find experienced side characters who don't act stupid. It gives a realistic vibe to the story and the characters feel more real. it's really a good story so far(read up to chapter 10).

6mth
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sixpathsofsimpLv4

The Great Spectral Soul Demon Vunerable.

6mth
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TranshumanistLv14

The MC is hard to like and the frankly idiotic chapter names are a net loss to the story.

4mth
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Hippo9999Lv15

Reveal spoiler

5mth
2
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Error_UzumakiLv14

Let Him Cook. .

5mth
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