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The sword saint can teleport to the mc and can heal and you made it clear that she values Subaru over any order given so what can’t she resolve easily? In cannon his weakness was he cared about others (or his purpose) so he’s been defeated before by just killing a ton a civilian he also was made mentally weak on purpose and easy to send somewhere else what’s this one weakness?

Great story so far the sword saint is kinda killing any stakes of the story so far and for some reason got buffed? But maybe the author will buff other characters or something to make it interesting. Overall a good rezero story and I do like the sword saints character in this but having her around so much is feels like I’m wasting my time know she will resolve any issue easily.

If you gotta amplify it so a person doesn’t do something bad that’s just sad.

I think me saying it’s funny implied that :/

A WebNovel reader taking their time to make this kinda finishes the cycle of unemployment that make it like a double joke lmao

This already is weird he’s a clan ninja so train them in what? And why would they can’t make him train someone as a clan ninja yet again and that team doesn’t make sense to give a yamanaka or anyone it’s has no balance of combat, subduction or surveillance. I know it’s a cn fic but it’s funny all of them make no sense off rip.

I hope he can change cannon without more backlashes and that’s marvel

This has a lot of potential but I think chapter 15 has kinda proved the author picked something too op to give the mc and can’t handle it plot wise so he’s gotta make stuff up so the mc can’t fight and it makes a lame read compared to the first few chapters. I get that he wanted to give the mc a set back but it felt so forced by plot and he spent years being tortured he didn’t need a set back you did.

This chapter fells like the author wanted to give the mc a set but but didn’t want to think of one that make sense like he got shot with 30 darts when he was distracted not shot by one while being able to transform on top of being immune that’s simply lazy and dumb.

It’s a Harry Potter fic doesn’t fit in dxd and it’s not in the tags or description