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These fanfics might be dulling your knowledge of the source material because Izumi is the youngest uchiha we know to use the sharingan(5y) and she still passed out when she used it at like 13 and fugaku literally said not all uchiha awaken the sharingan if the clan was at its peak they would have just took the village yet they got killed by obito and a child itachi.
Kinda lame but kinda worth it
Power is interesting but the mc is boring as hell, he’s not befriending out of respect or a gain or because he likes the characters he just doing it because they’re on the show just seems forced and unnecessary.
“Swallowing billions of bloodlines! Uchiha Shisui becomes the supreme” That’s what that translates to but the mc is not shisui?
Mc gets a kick in the balls and she gets this. This some spiderman level sabotage.
Losing his tail is pretty lame you already got the mc in pieces and scars and if a leapord saw a group of cubs I imagine it would leave because the lions are not far behind.
And the mc is a hollow I wish they put that in the title too😡
Him and Shoko might mess around but i wouldn’t be surprised if he got a arranged marriage.
How was this so evil and wholesome lol
The sword saint can teleport to the mc and can heal and you made it clear that she values Subaru over any order given so what can’t she resolve easily? In cannon his weakness was he cared about others (or his purpose) so he’s been defeated before by just killing a ton a civilian he also was made mentally weak on purpose and easy to send somewhere else what’s this one weakness?