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I hope he can change cannon without more backlashes and that’s marvel

This has a lot of potential but I think chapter 15 has kinda proved the author picked something too op to give the mc and can’t handle it plot wise so he’s gotta make stuff up so the mc can’t fight and it makes a lame read compared to the first few chapters. I get that he wanted to give the mc a set back but it felt so forced by plot and he spent years being tortured he didn’t need a set back you did.

This chapter fells like the author wanted to give the mc a set but but didn’t want to think of one that make sense like he got shot with 30 darts when he was distracted not shot by one while being able to transform on top of being immune that’s simply lazy and dumb.

It’s a Harry Potter fic doesn’t fit in dxd and it’s not in the tags or description

What a lame turn

Author has a tendency to meat ride all the characters but the translation is decent.

I like the story so far.

Good so far Ill edit this review if that opinion changes

It’s says system in the tags so like are you reviewing the tags…?

I hope he doesn’t spend most of the story hiding it