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Hippo9999Lv155mth
2024-09-27 18:39

The story develops unnaturally. The main character isn’t just indifferent, he is also almost emotionless and constantly thinks about how to manipulate people. However, his manipulation described by my the author is empty and as if the author is just brute forcing it to progress the story. The story has little flavor and seems tasteless. Many more small details could go into this story to make it feel more real. The idea feels only half developed. I stopped reading as soon as he starts stalking Kushina because he wants to “be the only one in Minato’s heart.” The storyline is completely unpredictable and seems more like random thoughts put together. I’m sorry for the bad review author, but at least make the MC seem like a real person and not like a robot.

Naruto: Uninterested Uchiha

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3.6
35 Chs

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Hurt_MeeAuthor

Understandable, thanks for the valid criticism, I will do better in the future. I recommend u continue reading tho as I've taken many similar pieces of advice and improved the story accordingly.

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I'd like to point out that I disagree with some of the other reviews; such as people complaining about the MC being weak or pathetic, because one of the tags for the story is weak to strong... I'd recommend the author to think about adding the dark tag. Like others have said or implied, it's easy to empathize with the MC and his choices and actions are understandable from his point of view. I do feel there are some lost opportunities, but not all characters are perfect and make the most efficient choices. Plus even if he didn't kill a certain girl who could have become a subordinate, it would have also required a ton of effort. And let's be real, now that I think about it again, he wasn't at the stage or point in his life that he could even save himself, let alone others. I guess I just wish dark stories were less dark, and yet I like reading dark stories just as much as wish fulfillment. Thanks to the author for writing, the occasional mass releases, replying to our comments, and being active.

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Blake_LangtonLv15

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belesa_femininaLv1

I don't know what happened to the MC but he has no attachment to anyone, apparently he hates Kushina for no reason. If there's someone who likes an edgy protagonist, maybe they'll like it.

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Haze_Lv4

It’s decent my only two issues are most of the mcs behavior so far is him acting like a autistic kid biting his mom and stuff and it’s not to seem like a regular kid because he’s not he’s just mental. My other issue was him wanting to got back to his world that just ruined any sense of immersion, for me at least it makes any actions he makes in the world seem meaningless if he’s leaving. Grammer is good.

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