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2024-08-30 17:14

The story has good LOTM/HP the main character is quite enjoyable to follow so far the story seems smooth as the author has structured the story quite nicely. My only issue is the pacing can feel a bit slow but it’s fine if you binge read the story. The update stability is good as the author is consistent with it.

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Hooin_Kyoma
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Thank you for the review! Glad you enjoyed the book so far and hope you enjoy what's to come! I've gotten other comments about the slow pacing, I will try and keep this in mind when writing future chapters.

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Time_walkerLv14

No worries I’m looking forward to see what you have In store for the future

Hooin_Kyoma:Thank you for the review! Glad you enjoyed the book so far and hope you enjoy what's to come! I've gotten other comments about the slow pacing, I will try and keep this in mind when writing future chapters.
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