first of all, I dropped this novel at chapter 68. Ok now the story is not bad, actually kinda interesting how the system works and all, my problem is the way the story is told, i don't feel like I'm reading a novel, it feels like I'm reading update notes. From the start it is displayed to us how the author write this: skipping days (sometimes 2 days, sometimes 10 days, sometimes a month) and we get the level up messages, it got worse (for me) when he started to learn magic, because the author doesn't explain the magic system or anything... the MC just learns it and level it up like any other skill, the sword skills the MC has also are not explained, "Leveraging his agile steps, he unleashed his strongest strike, the trademark move of Bat's Eyes — 'Bat Ring Dance Stab.'" what is the "Bat Ring Dance Stab"? I'm pretty sure its a combination of 4 stabs... how are the stabs? and the footwork? does it have any aura around it? we don't know... the novel lacks character, or core, or meat for the reader to get attached to... sure I do like the events that are followed in the story... but i don't care about them at all.
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