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XP_HAVOKLv43mth
2024-11-01 04:29

this has good potential I can tell English isn't your first Language but everything takes time. I'd recommend grammarly to help you find any mistakes you might make. also I'd recommend that when your English is better go over and edit any mistakes so your story can go farther and get more people to love it.

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Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4

isn't this a translation?

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