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Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv148mth
2024-08-27 08:42

I saw that it was a slacker system and immediately became a little wary because almost all of the novels that have those have a trash MC who never does anything for himself, has no real personality and just lazes around while passively gaining power from the system which is super boring. Anyways I gave it a go and didn't want to form any early opinions so i read like 50 additional chapters in MTL. Surprise surprise, an Mc with no ambition, his only desires include women and being rebellious and being lazy. Completely relies on the system for every speck of power, doesn't train. No goals, just a loafer who slacks around while acting better than everyone else and acting like a third rate playboy. I don't mean that he should want to be Hokage or support the village. But without some sort of goal, you've got no story. Without some actual effort on his part, you've got even less of a story. Disspointing and boring overall.

In Konoha, This Naruto Has Decided To Take It Easy

Iampoorguy
3.3
478 Chs

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Dash6217
Dash6217Lv14

The reviews felt lackluster so I read the novel and came back to give a review and realized another was added and yours sum up everything I was thinking about the fic. It is boring and filled with forced plot and romance that it makes me gag

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HollyRisk
HollyRiskLv15

it's really hard to find a good Chinese fic, but some of them are good but it's not the greatest. thanks for the review :D

8mth
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Vlad_the_lost
Vlad_the_lostLv3

finding a good Chinese novel is so hard that it's not even finding a needle in a hay stock but finding a single grain of sand in a beach

HollyRisk:it's really hard to find a good Chinese fic, but some of them are good but it's not the greatest. thanks for the review :D
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Mann_Teufortian
Mann_TeufortianLv4

I'm incredibly surprised at how popular this novel. It makes literally no sense, and much better stories like Konoha's Kanpu from THE SAME TRANSLATOR have next to no power stones and 0 comments. I can't understand, I really can't. someone who likes this book, please enlighten me

7mth
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No_1_islookin
No_1_islookinLv4

thanks, you just saved me. Cardinal sins include forced plot and salted fish getting free lunches.

Dash6217:The reviews felt lackluster so I read the novel and came back to give a review and realized another was added and yours sum up everything I was thinking about the fic. It is boring and filled with forced plot and romance that it makes me gag
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Dorian_1192
Dorian_1192Lv3

His desires don't include women because I'm 200+ chapters in and he hasn't even tried to kiss a single girl who's interested in him. It's worse than those romance anime who spend 3 seasons before the protagonists get together

5mth
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Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv14

So it's even worse than I thought...

Dorian_1192:His desires don't include women because I'm 200+ chapters in and he hasn't even tried to kiss a single girl who's interested in him. It's worse than those romance anime who spend 3 seasons before the protagonists get together
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The_reader_ofnovel
The_reader_ofnovelLv14

The thing that most irritates me about this novel is not the story itself. It’s how the author uploads each chapter out of order and you have to figure it out. I got so annoyed that I just dropped.

4mth
Illypo
IllypoLv13

Any examples tired of always reading shit novels 🥱😭

HollyRisk:it's really hard to find a good Chinese fic, but some of them are good but it's not the greatest. thanks for the review :D
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Dash6217
Dash6217Lv14

I am being nice here but this is boring and cliche, The system rewards makes zero sense like Pursue Hinata and get Kurama approval and then can use his chakra because of that with little contact. Kurama does not like humans so why would he approve of his host love life no he would be thinking of ways to escape. Then you have him debating between Lava release vs Wood release saying wood release would cause more attention on him like he already has attention on him for being born in the first place. Overall awful

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Idealist
IdealistLv14

i dunno why... but chinese novel always choose stupidiest choice. maybe it's innate.

8mth
DiabloRedfox
DiabloRedfoxLv14

i probably shouldn't have had any hope for a Chinese novel in the first place, if this genuinely was a laid back MC with a good system it might been good, this guy is just a useless gag MC, very disappointing

8mth
Swikong
SwikongLv4

This is tempting & addicting to read. It's worth wasting your time for this. Hope this story becomes/reaches it's grand completion.

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HONORABLE_DEVIL
HONORABLE_DEVILLv14

boring boring boring boring boring boring

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hunters30
hunters30Lv4

The story is barely legible at current point. Despite so many comments the chapters are repeatedly out of order and author has made absolutely no effort to fix it. Now this is bad because you may not notice while reading that you have jumped to wrong chapter and the entire narration becomes confusing to read. It's not readable on this platform atleast so I can't rate it better although previously I thought the story had good premise

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NeonPLay250
NeonPLay250Lv4

The story is boring, the main character is absolutely useless. The story is about nothing. No goals, with each chapter mc contradicts itself. Idleness + women. 0 hours of training or effort but still behaves cool. Slave of the system. I really regret those hours that I spent on 80 chapters

6mth
Hayate_Yuuji
Hayate_YuujiLv3

After 100 chapters I give up, I waited all this time to see if it would get better (spoiler: it didn't). Power level is meaningless, MC's personality is trash and the romance is forced, all of this accompanied by chapters out of order (for example: chapter 99 is posted, then 98 and then 101).

7mth
Lizrock
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