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Adnan_1
Adnan_1Lv43mth
2024-09-15 18:06

I just started and I admit I'm not very enthusiastic. The main character reincarnates because it’s said he has very good karma, but his behavior suggests that if behaving like he does allows you to reincarnate, then I think 80% of the global population would have reincarnated into their favorite universe in their favorite character’s body. Additionally, he receives the memories of 14 years of life with his cousin and uncle, and yet he feels nothing for them! That’s not normal; memories shape who we are, as well as the emotions we feel. If he feels nothing, it’s possible he could be a sociopath. And finally, the way things are written... I must admit it bothers me a bit, but I’m not sure how to describe it. The description doesn’t immerse me in the universe; it feels like the story is set in modern times rather than medieval. But, well, since there are so few fanfics about Eragon, I’ll continue a bit, hoping that it improves.

The Inheritance Cycle: Getting My Wish Fulfilled (Eragon)

CouchPotatoDandy
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HEMANG_SEN
HEMANG_SENLv4

You were right . The MC is arrogant and completely unlikeable . The Magic mechanics have been utterly destroyed for the *awe * factor. Unfortunately I can't even call it Eragon anymore

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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyAuthor

Author's shameless 5-star review. Some things about the story and plot, ~It's a The Inheritance Cycle fan-fic with good story building and strength progression from weak to strong. ~MC's strength will soar after a small time-skip which will be around the 5th chapter. ~There will be no harem. Happy Reading Everyone!!

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LesendeTaube
LesendeTaubeLv4

don't you dare drop this, there's too many eragon ffs luke that already

3mth
Mr_n
Mr_nLv3

I Found Gold ................................................................................................................................................

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Ima_Bot
Ima_BotLv14

I love it. Id genuinely cry if this is discontinued. Up to chapter 12, and its looking bright asf. I really excited to see the story progress with a competent protag.

3mth
LiveInFantasy
LiveInFantasyLv1

i love it to read a Story in the world of eragon. Please continue to write the story, it's great and I'm happy to continue reading it

2mth
CopyPaste1
CopyPaste1Lv13

a boring story nothing changes you have a Mc who care only for himself he cares only to level up is apathetic and arrogant every chapter and more and yea zero changes on plot

3mth
NamelessK1ng
NamelessK1ngLv4

I‘m really excited for the story. I like the slow start and hope u will continue this story. [img=update]

3mth
Unknown0070228
Unknown0070228Lv4

Great Story! Can’t wait for the next chapter of this amazing fanfic!

2mth
HEMANG_SEN
HEMANG_SENLv4

OK... The Mc is the make or break of any story , especially transmigration/reincarnation ones . And this fanfic just proves that . Eragon here is essentially arrogant ; somewhat tolerable at the start but now he is just unbearable. So if you dislike arrogance and you don't have an obsession with getting women or looking good. If you don't like MCs gloating about how good they have become every few paragraphs, DO NOT touch this fic. There are other sources to get yourself irritated, no need to suffer here. My next problem with this fic is writing. The author has ok grammar, but grammar isn't everything . The prose in accordance to the source material and the setting is "out of touch" ,to put it lightly. All characters often use modern words , which absolutely obliterates any immersion for me. Finally the system interface is useless. The resistance displays are very vague . (This message is for the author , as advice)Please when you use levels for progression , provide a scale. How strong are elves? how strong is a human . What value does a level has? what does 100 lvl mean. Everything is scattered. And while this is very convenient for you, as it allows you to adjust things for *PLOT*, for readers its a dropper. My advice to the author is "Rewrite". Make the Mc tolerable . Fix the writing and sentence making . Fix the system for god sakes. #3 Stars Look I also want a good Eragon fanfic , and while I have dropped the fic (until its improved), I wish you all the best.

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