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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyAuthor9mth
2024-08-20 00:11

Author's shameless 5-star review. Some things about the story and plot, ~It's a The Inheritance Cycle fan-fic with good story building and strength progression from weak to strong. ~MC's strength will soar after a small time-skip which will be around the 5th chapter. ~There will be no harem. Happy Reading Everyone!!

The Inheritance Cycle: Getting My Wish Fulfilled (Eragon)

CouchPotatoDandy
4.6
26 Chs

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Kr0n
Kr0nLv11

who is the love interest?

8mth
CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyAuthor

Haven't decided yet. I lean to choose Arya but that is too predictable and boring. But except for her I can't think of anyone else...

Kr0n:who is the love interest?
8mth
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xgrxc
xgrxcLv4

If you drop this, I WILL FIND YOU!!!!!

8mth
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H3adHun73r
H3adHun73rLv11

dragon...

CouchPotatoDandy:Haven't decided yet. I lean to choose Arya but that is too predictable and boring. But except for her I can't think of anyone else...
8mth
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aceZ0
aceZ0Lv4

Maybe one of the twelve elves sent to guard eragon?

CouchPotatoDandy:Haven't decided yet. I lean to choose Arya but that is too predictable and boring. But except for her I can't think of anyone else...
8mth
Celleborn
CellebornLv2

So I read Eragon 15 years ago or so and I hardly remember anything, this fic will assume that I know what happen in the books?

8mth
3
CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyAuthor

Only for the major events and plot. For the background details not so much.

Celleborn:So I read Eragon 15 years ago or so and I hardly remember anything, this fic will assume that I know what happen in the books?
8mth
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ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

so few eragon fanfic’s exist that it wouldn’t be overused if you used Arya

CouchPotatoDandy:Haven't decided yet. I lean to choose Arya but that is too predictable and boring. But except for her I can't think of anyone else...
8mth
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ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

H3adHun73r:dragon...
8mth
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LesendeTaube
LesendeTaubeLv4

I think Arya is great. Otherwise maybe an OC? The only other important female character that might be an option (which I remember) would be Nasuada

CouchPotatoDandy:Haven't decided yet. I lean to choose Arya but that is too predictable and boring. But except for her I can't think of anyone else...
8mth
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LesendeTaube
LesendeTaubeLv4

Tht‘s actually a great idea

aceZ0:Maybe one of the twelve elves sent to guard eragon?
8mth
1
DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

No ocs, ppl read ffs to read about the characters from the og story not some yes man character from outta nowhere

LesendeTaube:I think Arya is great. Otherwise maybe an OC? The only other important female character that might be an option (which I remember) would be Nasuada
8mth
LesendeTaube
LesendeTaubeLv4

I‘m still all for Arya

DaoistOfeOTA:No ocs, ppl read ffs to read about the characters from the og story not some yes man character from outta nowhere
8mth
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DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

I prefer dany as long as she don’t get drogo’d

LesendeTaube:I‘m still all for Arya
8mth
LesendeTaube
LesendeTaubeLv4

who's dany?

DaoistOfeOTA:I prefer dany as long as she don’t get drogo’d
8mth
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LesendeTaube
LesendeTaubeLv4

Bc this is not GoT

LesendeTaube:who's dany?
8mth
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DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

Oh my b thought this was a dif fic

LesendeTaube:who's dany?
8mth
DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

Yah I haven’t read this one yet but the cover looks the same as this other fic I’m reading so I got confused is the romance good in this?

LesendeTaube:Bc this is not GoT
8mth
LesendeTaube
LesendeTaubeLv4

There‘s none for now, the mc just met Arya and she was ofc unconscious

DaoistOfeOTA:Yah I haven’t read this one yet but the cover looks the same as this other fic I’m reading so I got confused is the romance good in this?
8mth
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DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

Oh great let’s hope it’s not like those cultivation stories

LesendeTaube:There‘s none for now, the mc just met Arya and she was ofc unconscious
8mth
Other Reviews
LesendeTaube
LesendeTaubeLv4

don't you dare drop this, there's too many eragon ffs luke that already

8mth

Mr_D_n
Mr_D_nLv4

I Found Gold ................................................................................................................................................

8mth
Adnan_1
Adnan_1Lv4

I just started and I admit I'm not very enthusiastic. The main character reincarnates because it’s said he has very good karma, but his behavior suggests that if behaving like he does allows you to reincarnate, then I think 80% of the global population would have reincarnated into their favorite universe in their favorite character’s body. Additionally, he receives the memories of 14 years of life with his cousin and uncle, and yet he feels nothing for them! That’s not normal; memories shape who we are, as well as the emotions we feel. If he feels nothing, it’s possible he could be a sociopath. And finally, the way things are written... I must admit it bothers me a bit, but I’m not sure how to describe it. The description doesn’t immerse me in the universe; it feels like the story is set in modern times rather than medieval. But, well, since there are so few fanfics about Eragon, I’ll continue a bit, hoping that it improves.

8mth
Ima_Bot
Ima_BotLv14

I love it. Id genuinely cry if this is discontinued. Up to chapter 12, and its looking bright asf. I really excited to see the story progress with a competent protag.

8mth
LiveInFantasy
LiveInFantasyLv1

i love it to read a Story in the world of eragon. Please continue to write the story, it's great and I'm happy to continue reading it

7mth
CopyPaste1
CopyPaste1Lv13

a boring story nothing changes you have a Mc who care only for himself he cares only to level up is apathetic and arrogant every chapter and more and yea zero changes on plot

8mth
NamelessK1ng
NamelessK1ngLv4

I‘m really excited for the story. I like the slow start and hope u will continue this story. [img=update]

8mth
Unknown0070228
Unknown0070228Lv4

Great Story! Can’t wait for the next chapter of this amazing fanfic!

7mth
Zercival
ZercivalLv4

OK... The Mc is the make or break of any story , especially transmigration/reincarnation ones . And this fanfic just proves that . Eragon here is essentially arrogant ; somewhat tolerable at the start but now he is just unbearable. So if you dislike arrogance and you don't have an obsession with getting women or looking good. If you don't like MCs gloating about how good they have become every few paragraphs, DO NOT touch this fic. There are other sources to get yourself irritated, no need to suffer here. My next problem with this fic is writing. The author has ok grammar, but grammar isn't everything . The prose in accordance to the source material and the setting is "out of touch" ,to put it lightly. All characters often use modern words , which absolutely obliterates any immersion for me. Finally the system interface is useless. The resistance displays are very vague . (This message is for the author , as advice)Please when you use levels for progression , provide a scale. How strong are elves? how strong is a human . What value does a level has? what does 100 lvl mean. Everything is scattered. And while this is very convenient for you, as it allows you to adjust things for *PLOT*, for readers its a dropper. My advice to the author is "Rewrite". Make the Mc tolerable . Fix the writing and sentence making . Fix the system for god sakes. #3 Stars Look I also want a good Eragon fanfic , and while I have dropped the fic (until its improved), I wish you all the best.

8mth
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