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maybe but in the last round where there will be thousand of people observing I'm not sure it's for the best that people kill each other in front of civilian and lords, I mean if they are in the last round that means that this are the best genin of their country, the loss of even one of them is terrible and in a world there is war near at every tile no country would accept this
yes but it was the referee that stop neji when he faced hinata and Gai saved lee no ? It's just doesn't make sense. Furthemore they are here to promote their village, and in the third it's public, if they were to be killed it would only be a loss in the third exam
It's a shame. For my part, as a simple viewer, the choice to depict Rhaegar as you have will be more of a hindrance and lower the overall quality of your work (which is very high). You're doing a bit of what all Naruto fanfiction authors do with the character Hiruzen, but by creating a character who is just a "villain," you're taking away depth from your story. Moreover, in the universe of Game of Thrones, what interests us is knowing that there are no clear-cut good and evil characters. I believe you had established this well so far, but by portraying Rhaegar in this way, you've changed the direction of the narrative towards something more superficial. Of course, this is just my humble opinion, and know that I will continue reading because, to me, this is the first "mistake" you've made.
Dear author, I recall you mentioning in the previous chapter that Magneto would remember this moment in the years to come, kind of like an enemy he would forever fear, allowing you to have an additional character to develop as well as creating a character who can have an interesting relationship. Moreover, I'm not sure if killing off [the character] was necessary for Angel's development. Gilgamesh's wake-up call was sufficient. So, I hope you haven't decided to change your storyline just because some idiots asked you to. Please note this is not a negative critique; I just find it unfortunate to part ways with a character (Magneto) who could have been interesting, but if it's for the good of the storyline, then I have nothing more to say. THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER !!!!
LOL, I think the author should consider revisiting his chapter. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
yep we just wasted time on this
Seriously ?!!
So it's after Iron Man 2 ?
Alas... I believe you have no choice; it's for the greater good.