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Adnan_1

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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_11d
    Replied to Kyroru

    maybe but in the last round where there will be thousand of people observing I'm not sure it's for the best that people kill each other in front of civilian and lords, I mean if they are in the last round that means that this are the best genin of their country, the loss of even one of them is terrible and in a world there is war near at every tile no country would accept this

    Ch 90 Kaito Chapter 90
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_14d
    Replied to Kyroru

    And if i remeber right the waver is only for the second not the rest

    Ch 90 Kaito Chapter 90
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_14d
    Replied to Kyroru

    yes but it was the referee that stop neji when he faced hinata and Gai saved lee no ? It's just doesn't make sense. Furthemore they are here to promote their village, and in the third it's public, if they were to be killed it would only be a loss in the third exam

    Ch 90 Kaito Chapter 90
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_14d
    Commented

    Just so I understand, during the third test, they can't kill each other right, it's only allowed during the second ?

    Ch 90 Kaito Chapter 90
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_18d
    Commented

    It's a shame. For my part, as a simple viewer, the choice to depict Rhaegar as you have will be more of a hindrance and lower the overall quality of your work (which is very high). You're doing a bit of what all Naruto fanfiction authors do with the character Hiruzen, but by creating a character who is just a "villain," you're taking away depth from your story. Moreover, in the universe of Game of Thrones, what interests us is knowing that there are no clear-cut good and evil characters. I believe you had established this well so far, but by portraying Rhaegar in this way, you've changed the direction of the narrative towards something more superficial. Of course, this is just my humble opinion, and know that I will continue reading because, to me, this is the first "mistake" you've made.

    Ch 35 Tourney at Harrenhal I
    Robert I Baratheon
    Book&Literature · DaoistWDfd8h
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_11mth
    Posted

    I started to read more and more Superman fan fiction in the Marvel universe, but I have to admit that this is the best I have read so far (at least on WEBNOVEL). So first, thanks for posting it, and second, I would like to know who the author is?

    Marvel : Superman
    Anime & Comics · HarHarMahadev
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_11mth
    Replied to HeroDuT1998

    Thank you

    Legacy of the White Dragon : Dance of the Dragons
    Book&Literature · HeroDuT1998
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_11mth
    Posted

    Is it me or is there a chapter missing (chapter 2) ?

    Legacy of the White Dragon : Dance of the Dragons
    Book&Literature · HeroDuT1998
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_12mth
    Commented

    Can someone remind me, Domeric shouldn't know Jon real name (Daeron) or i might mistake it with another fanfic ?

    Ch 19 Chapter 19
    Dragon from Winterfell
    Book&Literature · Arcane_Eso
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_12mth
    Commented

    Dear author, I recall you mentioning in the previous chapter that Magneto would remember this moment in the years to come, kind of like an enemy he would forever fear, allowing you to have an additional character to develop as well as creating a character who can have an interesting relationship. Moreover, I'm not sure if killing off [the character] was necessary for Angel's development. Gilgamesh's wake-up call was sufficient. So, I hope you haven't decided to change your storyline just because some idiots asked you to. Please note this is not a negative critique; I just find it unfortunate to part ways with a character (Magneto) who could have been interesting, but if it's for the good of the storyline, then I have nothing more to say. THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER !!!!

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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_12mth
    Commented
    This increased the potential for food production by a lot, allowing Selwyn Tarth to import additional population for the development of the northern part of the island. Galladon's goal is to increase the population of Tarth to 1,5 – 2 million people in the next ten years. To achieve this goal a lot of slaves are needed to mine stones and reclaim farmland. Furthermore, he suggested at an elder meeting of House Tarth to build additional granaries and horde food, while grain prices are still low right now.
    Game of Thrones: House of Tarth
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_12mth
    Replied to Niloy_Das

    LOL, I think the author should consider revisiting his chapter. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

    The magical ability of his aura completely evaded the tragic fate of House Tarth and established his role as the male heir of the family firmly. After building up a close and respectful relationship with his father and mother, he finally confessed them his ability 8 years ago, but chose not to reveal them his knowledge about the possible future, as to not cause large differences to the future he knew. Only a secret known to a single person could be kept a secret for a long time.
    Game of Thrones: House of Tarth
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_12mth
    Commented

    I really don't understand the timeline of his past life as Jon...

    Ch 16 A Feast
    Dance of The Dragonwolf
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_13mth
    Replied to Uveilazatrum

    yep we just wasted time on this

    I have no intention of telling readers how they should digest information, nor do I feel that I owe anyone an explanation beyond what is made implicit in the story.
    Reborn as Jon Snow's Twin - (Game of Thrones)
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_13mth
    Replied to VIP2001

    Seriously ?!!

    For a few weeks, apart from eating and training with my two swords, I did nothing but try to find that light in me, nothing more, nothing less, I persisted for a long time on this path and finally, after a full month, I felt the indescribable feeling that swelled my heart with joy, seeing that my practice was paying off, I started using meditation every day, and a week later, I was able to "activate" this power as I wished.
    Aegon Snow
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_13mth
    Commented

    doesn't he have mastered the flying thubder gid ?

    Ch 60 Kaito chapter 60
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_13mth
    Commented

    So it's after Iron Man 2 ?

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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_13mth
    Commented

    nice start

    Ch 4 Horrifying day in the dungeon
    Rising Flames Within
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_13mth
    Posted

    Sometimes I ask myself if the author ever thinks before they write their story. Many things defy logic, and what's with the new trend of authors making their main characters significantly taller than their actual age?

    Games Of Thrones: The Lost Hero (ENG)
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  • Adnan_1
    Adnan_13mth
    Replied to The_Enlightened

    Alas... I believe you have no choice; it's for the greater good.

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