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Silas_Savitar_
Silas_Savitar_Lv33mth
2024-10-05 15:20

I think it's okay, not bad but not particularly good either. It lacks a certain depth in the story and especially in the romance. It's also all very fast in terms of development. But I think it's good that it slowly deviates from the original plot and slowly builds up to something

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EyeOfSilver
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Had to check for romance tag it has it so story should EVENTUALLY get round to it. You won't get a full melodrama romance in fanfics sorry You can go to the tragedy romance section if you want that kind of toxic reading where it disappoints and kills everyone or makes you feel like shit reading it. Or you can go for general romance but usually their quite light on romance but sometimes their are ones that focus on it but that's rare man that's rare

Iron_Man_3000
Iron_Man_3000Lv14

Wow and no wonder this story is shit.., there’s a toxic writer who can’t give a damn about constructive criticisms.

EyeOfSilver:Had to check for romance tag it has it so story should EVENTUALLY get round to it. You won't get a full melodrama romance in fanfics sorry You can go to the tragedy romance section if you want that kind of toxic reading where it disappoints and kills everyone or makes you feel like shit reading it. Or you can go for general romance but usually their quite light on romance but sometimes their are ones that focus on it but that's rare man that's rare
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

Again...Learn...When...You...Should...Use...A...Ellipsis...Properly...Idiot...

Iron_Man_3000:Wow and no wonder this story is shit.., there’s a toxic writer who can’t give a damn about constructive criticisms.
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Iron_Man_3000
Iron_Man_3000Lv14

EyeOfSilver:Again...Learn...When...You...Should...Use...A...Ellipsis...Properly...Idiot...
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

That you damn no wonder your so shit at basic English.

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