mc is the most pathetic character ever written he has no dream, ambition, or any future planning he is simply following people command with no objection he simply feels like a dog who is carving for his owners attention I don't recommend for people to read this thrash

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The biggest problem with the story is the main character. He has no purpose other than to obey others and in most cases he is useless.

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This story is amazing. Despite the time jumps and the lack of some scenes that would have been nice to see, this story is easily one of my favorites so far. Keep going, good stories are hard to find these days.

worst same ending as canon mc is not needed in this story at all and daemon's marriage happened at 97 ac the year rhaenyra born. The reason we read fan fiction in the first place is we are not satisfied with original version.

what dog shit mc, weirdly written story.

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I understand the criticisms and even support some of them. Still, the story is entertaining, immersive and realistic... In the sense that the main character is a HoTD character and not a modern SI. Anyway, I found it to be a good story, very varied with very well constructed scenes that really excite and sadden, that's why I really liked the story, I would give it 5 stars but I'm sorry, Rhaenys died, I won't say anything else about it.

The story has a few time jumps tht may seem odd but necessary to the overall enjoyment, while the MC is dull at first, as the story progress you can see his personality and inner struggle between Nature and upbringing. Finally not many like an "ambitionless" protagonist, specially on a GoT setting x however I disagree, is refreshing to see someone who's ambition doesn't revolve around the "I'll be the new conqueror" Kingdom building that we are used to see in this type of stories (so far as ch 64.) instead his ambition is about duty and family.