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MiumLv23mth
2024-09-21 02:54

J'ai vu que tu es français donc je me permets de faire la critique dans cette langue. J'ai vraiment accroché à l'histoire, je trouve que tu as réussi à trouver un bon équilibre entre l'histoire/aventure et la documentation. Je me suis également attaché à Adam (j'aimerais bien avoir des pov de ses amis) et j'ai hâte de lire la suite. Merci pour le partage !

I transmigrated as a french soldier during XVIIIth century

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Merci beaucoup, lire ta critique me fais vraiment plaisir. J'ai passé beaucoup de temps à faire mes recherches et je continue d'en faire pour décrire cette époque très dense. Je suis aussi très soulagé que tu aies accroché au personnage principal. Il a failli être très différent. Je n'avais pas l'intention de faire des chapitres centré sur ses amis, mais en te lisant j'ai eu quelques idées intéressantes. Je pense que ça va plaire ^^

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in my opinion it is good despite the few views that has. the grammar is good, the world background hasn't been explored much but for now it is fine by me. the uploads are regular and the characters feel like real people. I would like more chapters but there isn't any need to rush.

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