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constantine15Lv48mth
2024-09-02 02:18

in my opinion it is good despite the few views that has. the grammar is good, the world background hasn't been explored much but for now it is fine by me. the uploads are regular and the characters feel like real people. I would like more chapters but there isn't any need to rush.

I transmigrated as a french soldier during XVIIIth century

Super_nugget
4.8
171 Chs

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Super_nugget
Super_nuggetAuthor

Thank you, Constantine 15, for your review. While I'm not a famous author with a lot of visibility, you can help by rating, adding to your collection, and commenting. I'm already happy to have regular readers. The story will progress, and you'll see parts of the world from different perspectives. The war isn't over yet, and there's a second story in my folders (still just drafts like the upcoming chapters).

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constantine15
constantine15Lv4

it's nothing, I love your work [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Super_nugget:Thank you, Constantine 15, for your review. While I'm not a famous author with a lot of visibility, you can help by rating, adding to your collection, and commenting. I'm already happy to have regular readers. The story will progress, and you'll see parts of the world from different perspectives. The war isn't over yet, and there's a second story in my folders (still just drafts like the upcoming chapters).
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

Super_nugget:Thank you, Constantine 15, for your review. While I'm not a famous author with a lot of visibility, you can help by rating, adding to your collection, and commenting. I'm already happy to have regular readers. The story will progress, and you'll see parts of the world from different perspectives. The war isn't over yet, and there's a second story in my folders (still just drafts like the upcoming chapters).
8mth
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Kingdom building?

Super_nugget:Thank you, Constantine 15, for your review. While I'm not a famous author with a lot of visibility, you can help by rating, adding to your collection, and commenting. I'm already happy to have regular readers. The story will progress, and you'll see parts of the world from different perspectives. The war isn't over yet, and there's a second story in my folders (still just drafts like the upcoming chapters).
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Super_nugget
Super_nuggetAuthor

There will be a bit of romance, but that is not the main theme of this story. As for kingdom-building, I don't think so, because usually, you have a character who starts with nothing and ends up with everything. Even though history has a few figures like this, the best example in France being certainly Napoleon Bonaparte, it is something so exceptional that I don't think I am capable of creating a convincing story to place my protagonist at the head of a kingdom. Especially since he is relatively ordinary. He is not a superhuman with extensive knowledge in military strategy, urban planning, engineering, etc. While there is something cool about this idea, implementing it without breaking the realism would honestly be too complex for me.

Romance_guy:Kingdom building?
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ThisguyAEl
ThisguyAElLv13

While agree with you not going with the kingdom building route (It’s kinda overdone in my opinion), i still think it’d be a waste if Adam the mc doesn’t end up spearheading some kind of movement in the novel, like maybe an early & less violent french revolution, transitioning france into a modern republic more smoother than in our timeline.

Super_nugget:There will be a bit of romance, but that is not the main theme of this story. As for kingdom-building, I don't think so, because usually, you have a character who starts with nothing and ends up with everything. Even though history has a few figures like this, the best example in France being certainly Napoleon Bonaparte, it is something so exceptional that I don't think I am capable of creating a convincing story to place my protagonist at the head of a kingdom. Especially since he is relatively ordinary. He is not a superhuman with extensive knowledge in military strategy, urban planning, engineering, etc. While there is something cool about this idea, implementing it without breaking the realism would honestly be too complex for me.
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ThisguyAEl
ThisguyAElLv13

Dont drop it pls, i need a new choater everyday

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Mium
MiumLv2

J'ai vu que tu es français donc je me permets de faire la critique dans cette langue. J'ai vraiment accroché à l'histoire, je trouve que tu as réussi à trouver un bon équilibre entre l'histoire/aventure et la documentation. Je me suis également attaché à Adam (j'aimerais bien avoir des pov de ses amis) et j'ai hâte de lire la suite. Merci pour le partage !

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IndigoChild
IndigoChildLv4

it is really good, and I like the history bit at the end of each chapter,👍

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Shingle_Top
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This story is an exemplar of the historical fiction on this site, it lacks nothing one could want in such a story

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AlexZero12
AlexZero12Lv1

Why such small companies? Also, the long reloading time seems unrealistic, as trained line infantry of that era could fire 2–3 volleys per minute with flintlock muskets.

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George_Bush_2910
George_Bush_2910Lv1

Please tell me you plan on reaching French Revolution. I know you potentially set up an out with the watch, but I'm down to read until 1815+. Great story!

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Porthos10
Porthos10Lv13

Probably one of the most original historical fiction works on this site. Each chapter is well written, and if I'm not mistaken, each chapter provides information about the historical events or figures Adam encounters throughout his journey. So, we can applaud the author's excellent work upfront. The pace is slow but well-executed, unlike other similarly paced works, where one might think that some chapters are intended to pay the author. Keep going [img=recommend][img=update]

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it's good (・∀・)(・∀・)(・∀・)(・∀・)(◕ᴗ◕✿)(◕ᴗ◕✿)(◕ᴗ◕✿)(◕ᴗ◕✿)(◕ᴗ◕✿)( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)

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Daoist7ArVjY
Daoist7ArVjYLv11

I like it :) good job writing this, wished there were more similar fics i dont know what more to write for the minimum word count to post the review

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