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SirantulasLv44mth
2024-09-30 14:28

It begins with a great start. Bonus gym Gary Oak went against, with an isekai protag. Sadly, it devolves into "system" slop quite fast. The story didn't even need it in the first place as a counter type gym would actually be a fascinating read, but instead we get shortcuts through the beginning where instead of character development we get menus and stuff from doing basic things the MC would have done anyways. Also, we get the regular intelligence debuff for Canon characters that is all too common in this type of story.

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EroFanLv4

i disliked the system concept and the fact that he lowered the intelligence of the Canon characters too. lol

EyeOfSilverLv13

I disagree I enjoy system novels helps me keep track of capabilities which helps quite a bit plus the system doesn't issue tasks here and plays a minimal role in the story so I'm not quite sure how it became system slop??? seems like your being a bit prejudice their.

EyeOfSilverLv13

Your review started good but sadly it devolves into "review" slop quite fast. The system barely has any appearance and most the time its the pokedex that appears. It is a type gym with a interesting roulette variant. Their was no real shortcut he still had to journey in his sleep so he still worked hard just like you in a pokemon game.

Vedora_TempestLv13

So you have nothing against the intelligence of the canon characters being lowered? you're biased lol..

EyeOfSilver:Your review started good but sadly it devolves into "review" slop quite fast. The system barely has any appearance and most the time its the pokedex that appears. It is a type gym with a interesting roulette variant. Their was no real shortcut he still had to journey in his sleep so he still worked hard just like you in a pokemon game.
EyeOfSilverLv13

Good attempt nice alt It ain't that deep just put the fries in the bag bro

Vedora_Tempest:So you have nothing against the intelligence of the canon characters being lowered? you're biased lol..
EyeOfSilverLv13

Dunno why u even replied I'm just gonna block you and your alts :/

Vedora_Tempest:So you have nothing against the intelligence of the canon characters being lowered? you're biased lol..
Vedora_TempestLv13

Ret*rd, I'm not an alt. That guy can go f__k himself for all I care, I wanted to know why you left out the "intelligence being lowered" point, if you call everyone who disagrees with you and "Alt" you're being a child.

EyeOfSilver:Good attempt nice alt It ain't that deep just put the fries in the bag bro
Muhammad_Danish_5221Lv2

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Vedora_Tempest:Ret*rd, I'm not an alt. That guy can go f__k himself for all I care, I wanted to know why you left out the "intelligence being lowered" point, if you call everyone who disagrees with you and "Alt" you're being a child.
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