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Sirantulas
SirantulasLv46mth
2024-09-30 22:28

It begins with a great start. Bonus gym Gary Oak went against, with an isekai protag. Sadly, it devolves into "system" slop quite fast. The story didn't even need it in the first place as a counter type gym would actually be a fascinating read, but instead we get shortcuts through the beginning where instead of character development we get menus and stuff from doing basic things the MC would have done anyways. Also, we get the regular intelligence debuff for Canon characters that is all too common in this type of story.

Pokemon: Gym Leader

RockyRoad891
4.6
256 Chs

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EroFan
EroFanLv4

i disliked the system concept and the fact that he lowered the intelligence of the Canon characters too. lol

4mth
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EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

I disagree I enjoy system novels helps me keep track of capabilities which helps quite a bit plus the system doesn't issue tasks here and plays a minimal role in the story so I'm not quite sure how it became system slop??? seems like your being a bit prejudice their.

3mth
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EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

Your review started good but sadly it devolves into "review" slop quite fast. The system barely has any appearance and most the time its the pokedex that appears. It is a type gym with a interesting roulette variant. Their was no real shortcut he still had to journey in his sleep so he still worked hard just like you in a pokemon game.

3mth
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Vedora_Tempest
Vedora_TempestLv13

So you have nothing against the intelligence of the canon characters being lowered? you're biased lol..

EyeOfSilver:Your review started good but sadly it devolves into "review" slop quite fast. The system barely has any appearance and most the time its the pokedex that appears. It is a type gym with a interesting roulette variant. Their was no real shortcut he still had to journey in his sleep so he still worked hard just like you in a pokemon game.
2mth
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EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

Good attempt nice alt It ain't that deep just put the fries in the bag bro

Vedora_Tempest:So you have nothing against the intelligence of the canon characters being lowered? you're biased lol..
2mth
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EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

Dunno why u even replied I'm just gonna block you and your alts :/

Vedora_Tempest:So you have nothing against the intelligence of the canon characters being lowered? you're biased lol..
2mth
Vedora_Tempest
Vedora_TempestLv13

Ret*rd, I'm not an alt. That guy can go f__k himself for all I care, I wanted to know why you left out the "intelligence being lowered" point, if you call everyone who disagrees with you and "Alt" you're being a child.

EyeOfSilver:Good attempt nice alt It ain't that deep just put the fries in the bag bro
2mth
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ddfffffffLv3

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Vedora_Tempest:Ret*rd, I'm not an alt. That guy can go f__k himself for all I care, I wanted to know why you left out the "intelligence being lowered" point, if you call everyone who disagrees with you and "Alt" you're being a child.
2mth
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LoNeLy_BoYz
LoNeLy_BoYzLv4

Just Watch From the Anime 🤣

21d
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Velliolx
VelliolxLv14

what is the name of raw . .

7mth

Derek_Lycan
Derek_LycanLv4

THIS IS A GOOD POKEMON FANFIC. This seems like a original concept. So I will point out the facts: 1. I can't comment on updaterate of the chapters because as of this review, the chapters read were in Mass Release. Everything else seems good to me. 2. Concept is great. seemed to be an transmigrated story without Systems. 3. interesting idea concept especially with the mc being a gym leader of a declining gym.

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KoolBeans
KoolBeansLv4

RAW: 精灵，谁让他做道馆馆主的 The story has an interesting premise and there's stable updates. There is a system which may put some people off this story, but aside from that its a solid read. The translation is also pretty good.

7mth
Ethan_Sheld
Ethan_SheldLv13

what's the name of the raw does anyone know?

7mth
Alice_chris_Noah
Alice_chris_NoahLv4

Nice fic, there are few good ones on gym leaders out there. Can anyone give me recommendations similar to this?? One i can recommend is:- Where the Moon Rises - by fuwami.

7mth
SolrakRK
SolrakRKLv13

translator-san, or author, put the raw in the synopsis please, to make this easy for the gang MTL find....

6mth
Darquesse
DarquesseLv6

The simple explanation for this story is “reincarnater becomes gym leader and trolls challengers with the most toxic, cancer inducing strats possible.” It’s hilarious.

4mth
GyroJapster
GyroJapsterLv4

The premise is good. Writing is ok. But the 'System' mechanic came out of nowhere, there wasn't even a tag for it. I expected the gym leader mc use his meta-knowledge to his advantage, which he still uses, but those moments feel shallow when he literally uses short-cuts with his System. And the exaggerated female praising is just plain cringe. It's like the author written it with one hand... I certainly hope he wouldn't be one of those mc that treats men different from fem just to show he's the toxic 'alpha male'.... Toxic gym leader I mean.

5mth
Ozil_Lah
Ozil_LahLv1

This work is very good, when I read it, I couldn't stop reading.I really find this work difficult, keep going and keep up the enthusiasm .iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

6mth
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