THIS IS A GOOD POKEMON FANFIC. This seems like a original concept. So I will point out the facts: 1. I can't comment on updaterate of the chapters because as of this review, the chapters read were in Mass Release. Everything else seems good to me. 2. Concept is great. seemed to be an transmigrated story without Systems. 3. interesting idea concept especially with the mc being a gym leader of a declining gym.

RAW: 精灵，谁让他做道馆馆主的 The story has an interesting premise and there's stable updates. There is a system which may put some people off this story, but aside from that its a solid read. The translation is also pretty good.

what's the name of the raw does anyone know?

It begins with a great start. Bonus gym Gary Oak went against, with an isekai protag. Sadly, it devolves into "system" slop quite fast. The story didn't even need it in the first place as a counter type gym would actually be a fascinating read, but instead we get shortcuts through the beginning where instead of character development we get menus and stuff from doing basic things the MC would have done anyways. Also, we get the regular intelligence debuff for Canon characters that is all too common in this type of story.

Nice fic, there are few good ones on gym leaders out there. Can anyone give me recommendations similar to this?? One i can recommend is:- Where the Moon Rises - by fuwami.

translator-san, or author, put the raw in the synopsis please, to make this easy for the gang MTL find....

The premise is good. Writing is ok. But the 'System' mechanic came out of nowhere, there wasn't even a tag for it. I expected the gym leader mc use his meta-knowledge to his advantage, which he still uses, but those moments feel shallow when he literally uses short-cuts with his System. And the exaggerated female praising is just plain cringe. It's like the author written it with one hand... I certainly hope he wouldn't be one of those mc that treats men different from fem just to show he's the toxic 'alpha male'.... Toxic gym leader I mean.

This work is very good, when I read it, I couldn't stop reading.I really find this work difficult, keep going and keep up the enthusiasm .iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Interesting story, love it original content but I think system make the mc too op but still like the story and another plus point of story is that there many good battle