Item: Villain: I Shall NTR All The Sons Of Destiny's
Rating: 3
Author: SleepySmile

SleepySmileLv144mth

2024-09-01 20:29

Near 30 chapter for mc past life rlly... could have been made shorter

Villain: I Shall NTR All The Sons Of Destiny's

Twintail

4.1

83 Chs

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TwintailAuthor

I did thought of shortening it but then I wanted to try smth unique since other novel only do a few flashback here and there

4mth

PsyLoRDLv5

But you did nothing new, you just repeated the synopsis...

Twintail:I did thought of shortening it but then I wanted to try smth unique since other novel only do a few flashback here and there

3mth

TwintailAuthor

what nothing new bro? it's not usual that authors start from zero and show actually what really happened and not just a quick flashbacks here and there.

PsyLoRD:But you did nothing new, you just repeated the synopsis...

3mth

PsyLoRDLv5

" I wanted to try smth unique" that's what I meant by 'new', new would be if you expanded on what we already know (the synopsis) but that's not what you did, you just repeated the synopsis in 20ch. Also, most authors skip the start part cause not only it's useless, but it is boring, you should always remember that smt 'unique' doesn't mean it is good. Anyway, I don't care enough, do whatever you want.

Twintail:what nothing new bro? it's not usual that authors start from zero and show actually what really happened and not just a quick flashbacks here and there.

3mth

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Brothers and Sisters! If you liked it and want to send anything in this work, hold your horse and go here: You'll love it (and you can show support to that work thinking it's this one 😉😋😏) My second book, which ive already given the link needs all of your support! 🙏✊🥺

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25 chapters to simply repeat what is already summarized in the synopsis. In general, if you have already read the synopsis, you can start reading with chapter 26.

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CONGRATULATIONS! 🎊 Why? because you found this piece of art. Now, let's get on to what this poor author has to say. All I want to say is that read this for at least 30 chapter and decide if it's for you or not. I can confidently say that after chapter 30 does this gets better and better. (Begger: Send this poor soul gifts 😭 to reward his hard work and join the privilege, if not, then you'll miss out on a lot and won't be able to see them in their prime glory :>) Take this as QNA Box and let your questions flow out, I, as a good author will answer 'em all.

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i can't find your second ntr novel help author

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Dear Author-san, even though only three chapters are out, It's still an amazing read, although Arthur's debt was surprising! But keep up the good work and keep posting!

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story is peak but what is the update schedule?

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big fan twin tail! hope to get some wisdom 😃😃

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It's an enjoyable read. The chapters are uploaded fast as well. Just don't drop it in the middle and you are set to go. Keep writing man.

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