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DreamReaper
DreamReaperLv27mth
2024-08-29 23:39

The start of the story could've been better. There are some minor loopholes which could be changed. The story took too long before jumping into the cultivation world. This entire first story of Ivan could've been displayed better in some sort of flashbacks while cultivating. Him being reminded of his past life after seeing similarities in the other world rather than taking this long way trip just to be Isekai'd. If this was not a cultivation novel or any transmigration, the chapter till his death could be a much better story, though rather than him dying, he strayed into the path of no return and so on and so on.

Villain: I Shall NTR All The Sons Of Destiny's

Twintail
4.0
83 Chs

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Twintail
TwintailAuthor

i did thought of such but then I thought it'll he better to do an entire arc on earth since most never do that and just give some small flashback.. I just tired a new way. about minor loopholes, yeah I seem to have left quite a bit of loopholes so, I'll try to mix them all. haha, I did thought of making this a magical realism fic but then I'm not very good at making one... but thank you, I'll try to fix the loopholes.

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Twintail
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Brothers and Sisters! If you liked it and want to send anything in this work, hold your horse and go here: You'll love it (and you can show support to that work thinking it's this one 😉😋😏) My second book, which ive already given the link needs all of your support! 🙏✊🥺

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Fabio_De_SouzaJR
Fabio_De_SouzaJRLv12

25 chapters to simply repeat what is already summarized in the synopsis. In general, if you have already read the synopsis, you can start reading with chapter 26.

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Twintail
TwintailAuthor

CONGRATULATIONS! 🎊 Why? because you found this piece of art. Now, let's get on to what this poor author has to say. All I want to say is that read this for at least 30 chapter and decide if it's for you or not. I can confidently say that after chapter 30 does this gets better and better. (Begger: Send this poor soul gifts 😭 to reward his hard work and join the privilege, if not, then you'll miss out on a lot and won't be able to see them in their prime glory :>) Take this as QNA Box and let your questions flow out, I, as a good author will answer 'em all.

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Just_act_lazy
Just_act_lazyLv13

i can't find your second ntr novel help author

6mth
SleepySmile
SleepySmileLv14

Near 30 chapter for mc past life rlly... could have been made shorter

7mth
Izana07
Izana07Lv13

Dear Author-san, even though only three chapters are out, It's still an amazing read, although Arthur's debt was surprising! But keep up the good work and keep posting!

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Just_act_lazy
Just_act_lazyLv13

story is peak but what is the update schedule?

7mth
One2Turtle
One2TurtleLv14

Noiceyy —————————-

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TheNaughtyChild
TheNaughtyChildLv1

big fan twin tail! hope to get some wisdom 😃😃

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Worthless_Wanderer
Worthless_WandererLv13

It's an enjoyable read. The chapters are uploaded fast as well. Just don't drop it in the middle and you are set to go. Keep writing man.

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