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SleepySmile
SleepySmileLv147mth
2024-09-01 20:29

Near 30 chapter for mc past life rlly... could have been made shorter

Villain: I Shall NTR All The Sons Of Destiny's

Twintail
4.0
83 Chs

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Twintail
TwintailAuthor

I did thought of shortening it but then I wanted to try smth unique since other novel only do a few flashback here and there

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PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

But you did nothing new, you just repeated the synopsis...

Twintail:I did thought of shortening it but then I wanted to try smth unique since other novel only do a few flashback here and there
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Twintail
TwintailAuthor

what nothing new bro? it's not usual that authors start from zero and show actually what really happened and not just a quick flashbacks here and there.

PsyLoRD:But you did nothing new, you just repeated the synopsis...
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PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

" I wanted to try smth unique" that's what I meant by 'new', new would be if you expanded on what we already know (the synopsis) but that's not what you did, you just repeated the synopsis in 20ch. Also, most authors skip the start part cause not only it's useless, but it is boring, you should always remember that smt 'unique' doesn't mean it is good. Anyway, I don't care enough, do whatever you want.

Twintail:what nothing new bro? it's not usual that authors start from zero and show actually what really happened and not just a quick flashbacks here and there.
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Twintail
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Brothers and Sisters! If you liked it and want to send anything in this work, hold your horse and go here: You'll love it (and you can show support to that work thinking it's this one 😉😋😏) My second book, which ive already given the link needs all of your support! 🙏✊🥺

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Fabio_De_SouzaJR
Fabio_De_SouzaJRLv12

25 chapters to simply repeat what is already summarized in the synopsis. In general, if you have already read the synopsis, you can start reading with chapter 26.

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Twintail
TwintailAuthor

CONGRATULATIONS! 🎊 Why? because you found this piece of art. Now, let's get on to what this poor author has to say. All I want to say is that read this for at least 30 chapter and decide if it's for you or not. I can confidently say that after chapter 30 does this gets better and better. (Begger: Send this poor soul gifts 😭 to reward his hard work and join the privilege, if not, then you'll miss out on a lot and won't be able to see them in their prime glory :>) Take this as QNA Box and let your questions flow out, I, as a good author will answer 'em all.

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Just_act_lazy
Just_act_lazyLv13

i can't find your second ntr novel help author

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Izana07
Izana07Lv13

Dear Author-san, even though only three chapters are out, It's still an amazing read, although Arthur's debt was surprising! But keep up the good work and keep posting!

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Just_act_lazy
Just_act_lazyLv13

story is peak but what is the update schedule?

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One2Turtle
One2TurtleLv14

Noiceyy —————————-

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TheNaughtyChild
TheNaughtyChildLv1

big fan twin tail! hope to get some wisdom 😃😃

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Worthless_Wanderer
Worthless_WandererLv13

It's an enjoyable read. The chapters are uploaded fast as well. Just don't drop it in the middle and you are set to go. Keep writing man.

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DreamReaper
DreamReaperLv2

The start of the story could've been better. There are some minor loopholes which could be changed. The story took too long before jumping into the cultivation world. This entire first story of Ivan could've been displayed better in some sort of flashbacks while cultivating. Him being reminded of his past life after seeing similarities in the other world rather than taking this long way trip just to be Isekai'd. If this was not a cultivation novel or any transmigration, the chapter till his death could be a much better story, though rather than him dying, he strayed into the path of no return and so on and so on.

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