DreamReaper

Not bad for the 1st chapter but it needs to be more solidified. Issues are stated in the paragraph comments.

This should be in the auxiliary chapter.

block of text.

I believe youv'e already stated that the next generation had an awakening. There's no need for repetition.

If most humans have died, like what you said that the world has become unfit for the living, scarcity of resources even rich people would spare no effort in securing them. So having companies, organizations separately does not make much sense unless they have plenty of competitors.

Separate the paragraphs. Rn it's just a block of text.

"he did not stop" who are you pertaining to?

change unlimited to something else, humans are finite after all.

Funny as fck 🤣

MC really likes to swear a lot 🤣