Overall, if you're a fan of the "I Am the Fated Villain" novel or comic, you are going to like this. It shares MANY similarities with it, with the exception of that we get tons of erotic 'extras' that the original lacks. The systems are similar enough that I would be very surprised if the author didn't take tons of inspiration from "I am the Fated Villain." The Good: Above average XXX scenes, good mix of story with a sprinkling of comedic moments, but not a comedy by any means. Pure male power fantasy done right. For their first novel on Webnovel, this doesn't read like someone's first novel. While the writing quality isn't amazing, it is significantly better than the average first novel of most writers. (I still cringe looking at my first, The Alterra Project, when I look at the earlier chapters.) The Bad: Due to the nature of this type of novel, we're lacking a lot of the world background and characters are very quick to be introduced and forgotten. This isn't a huge problem though because this story is purely for the MC and is not meant to be thought provoking, but I personally like deeper characters. No updates for a week after going premium is a bad sign, but hopefully, the author is just gathering their thoughts and penning up more chapters. The Neutral: I personally wish for more in-depth characters that we can watch grow together, but that is just my personal wish and not the purpose of this story, so it doesn't affect this review. I can't say how the later chapters are because I'm cheap, but the author is off to a good start and seems to know exactly what they're doing.
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Thank you for the detailed review :) and yes I took inspiration from I am the Fated Villain, especially the concept of the system and its rewards! As for the characters and world building, I will progressively expand it as we are approaching volume two. I have already started putting more information on the political status of the countries and the continents as well as the lore. There is a lot of information to go over, so I take my time to dish it out, although I will not say I am quite good at it. Concerning the going premium, I was updating XD but I wasn't aware everything would be going to the privilege chapters and not updating on the normal premium chapters. But I have corrected it luckily! I will put your review to good use, thanks again!
Author does the MC just use the heroines and leave them or do they join an active Harem?
The latter
Taz_Harding:Author does the MC just use the heroines and leave them or do they join an active Harem?
so author are u dropping this??
SleazyPen:The latter
Will this be continued or have you moved on to your new novel?
SleazyPen:Thank you for the detailed review :) and yes I took inspiration from I am the Fated Villain, especially the concept of the system and its rewards! As for the characters and world building, I will progressively expand it as we are approaching volume two. I have already started putting more information on the political status of the countries and the continents as well as the lore. There is a lot of information to go over, so I take my time to dish it out, although I will not say I am quite good at it. Concerning the going premium, I was updating XD but I wasn't aware everything would be going to the privilege chapters and not updating on the normal premium chapters. But I have corrected it luckily! I will put your review to good use, thanks again!
