LordSputnik

The original is called "Sublight Drive" on Royal Road or anywhere else by mirrth OR miraage. If you see it by any other title or under a different author name, it is not the original authors.

The original is called "Sublight Drive" on Royal Road or anywhere else by mirrth OR miraage. If you see it by any other title or under a different author name, it is not the original authors.

Author probably forgot to do that when they copy and pasted it after stealing it from the original source.

"Author" won't give you any actual feedback since they stole it.

Glad to see you are back! Tone it down with the AI usage, though. Doesn't feel the same as your earlier chapters.

lol, the bot saying they will do a comic adaptation of a comic.

This was a terrible choice to adapt into a comic. The story is great, the problem-solving is great, and even the actual theory behind a lot of the stuff is relatively accurate. The problem is, this isn't an action story, nor a romance, nor even a detective story. It is literally just MC gets system, researches, earns rewards, MC solves a problem through research, earns rewards, gives a speech, earns rewards. It's super boring as a comic since EVERY PANEL is just watered-down dialogue of the original novel. No real conflict, nothing ever feels urgent, you can't even tell what's actually going on most of them due to the poor adaptation.

Don't delete your replies, tell me what you think or give me your thought process. Maybe I misinterpreted what you were trying to do.[img=recommend]

Honest Review: The Good: We have a genre here that isn't very popular, so it is very nice to see more. The dialog itself is fairly decent, but... The Bad: After 14 chapters, literally nothing has happened after chapter 2. The first 2 chapters were extremely short, too short even, but they were structured like a normal novel. Every other chapter reads like a stage play except with almost entirely dialogue. I see nothing of what was given in the synopsis. We also don't have any world-building aside from a named restaurant. Where are you trying to take us? The Neutral: While it has 14 chapters, the actual length of it is closer to 5 or 6, so having nothing happen within the first 5 or 6 chapters isn't so bad. Having a boy named 'Hanako' just feels weird since it is traditionally a girl's name, but that's just a personal gripe, not related to my rating at all. Also, a 7-star restaurant isn't anything official and normally only applies to the Burj Al Arab in Dubai since they coined the term themselves, but a 1 to 3 Michelin star rating is very important and is what all restaurants aspire to receive. Most people probably don't care, though, and just think more stars equals better and more expensive. Why was this restructured to look like a stage play after chapter 2? Chapter 12 literally has a line that says, "The scene shifts to Hanako," which is quite awkward.

Much better! This isn't AI-generated but is AI-enhanced. I'm okay with that. The excessive use of em dashes is a telltale sign of this.