Overall, if you're a fan of the "I Am the Fated Villain" novel or comic, you are going to like this. It shares MANY similarities with it, with the exception of that we get tons of erotic 'extras' that the original lacks. The systems are similar enough that I would be very surprised if the author didn't take tons of inspiration from "I am the Fated Villain." The Good: Above average XXX scenes, good mix of story with a sprinkling of comedic moments, but not a comedy by any means. Pure male power fantasy done right. For their first novel on Webnovel, this doesn't read like someone's first novel. While the writing quality isn't amazing, it is significantly better than the average first novel of most writers. (I still cringe looking at my first, The Alterra Project, when I look at the earlier chapters.) The Bad: Due to the nature of this type of novel, we're lacking a lot of the world background and characters are very quick to be introduced and forgotten. This isn't a huge problem though because this story is purely for the MC and is not meant to be thought provoking, but I personally like deeper characters. No updates for a week after going premium is a bad sign, but hopefully, the author is just gathering their thoughts and penning up more chapters. The Neutral: I personally wish for more in-depth characters that we can watch grow together, but that is just my personal wish and not the purpose of this story, so it doesn't affect this review. I can't say how the later chapters are because I'm cheap, but the author is off to a good start and seems to know exactly what they're doing.

author is there Yuri in it I hope not ..

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This is seriously good. MC with brain. Well described character. but MCs fiancé wasn't introduced yet😑 But please don't make her some yandere that even genius MC of our can't handle. That will ruin MCs image that author made until now.

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I understand you're focusing on your other book, but please don't abandon this one. Will you be picking this up later, or is it canceled? I'd love a reply.

Honestly author, you really should explain this part extensively right at the first chapter, because this is likely the most important aspect whenever a war of words happens. This world has almost always been busy with conflict,wars, fight, cultivation/gaining power. Only in the recent few years has there been peace. Only in times of peace would the importance of debating skills, understanding human psychology matter. In a world where only power matters and fights are the norm, what use is good speaking skills? And also people seriously underestimate the miraculous effect of Internet too much. Internet gives everyone soo much information, we see so much human interaction from movies to social media content, we learn so much about different people and scenarios, different perspectives and ways of speaking, and just, it's just not comparable to medieval age even with magic added. And the novel literally is middle age with advanced magic features, and underdeveloped psychology knowledge because only strength mattered for a long time.

Author are you dropped this novel. If, why?????? I'm loving your plot and the way you are developing the main characters.