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DestroyingPaper
DestroyingPaperLv48mth
2024-08-07 18:53

barely anything happens, a lot of yapping with no progress to the story.

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Socksniffer
SocksnifferAuthor

Imagine not defeating the final boss on the first chapter

Defective_Angel
Defective_AngelLv14

I guess he want your MC has multiversal power level at the beginning of story without any story behind that

Socksniffer:Imagine not defeating the final boss on the first chapter
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Crycks
CrycksLv14

That’s probably what happens when you ask for review at tenth chapter

Socksniffer:Imagine not defeating the final boss on the first chapter
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Socksniffer
SocksnifferAuthor

Or simply a hater. Plus, I doubt he made that review on 10th chapter. Just make your eyes work and you'll see so

Crycks:That’s probably what happens when you ask for review at tenth chapter
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pakahi7952Lv1

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Rogue_Nin
Rogue_NinLv4

At least change name to japanese name it gives bob uchiha vibes

Socksniffer:Or simply a hater. Plus, I doubt he made that review on 10th chapter. Just make your eyes work and you'll see so
Socksniffer
SocksnifferAuthor

giving me extra work eh? Almost had me there

Rogue_Nin:At least change name to japanese name it gives bob uchiha vibes
SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

this is my only complaint why him being a uchiha if he has a system like honestly i rather him be like might guy

Socksniffer:Imagine not defeating the final boss on the first chapter
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nacht
nachtLv14

tbh after seeing this comment and reading chapter one and finding what mc name is, I really tempted to review bomb this fanfic with one star, but since I'm not in my mood then I'm not doing it.

Socksniffer:giving me extra work eh? Almost had me there
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Socksniffer
SocksnifferAuthor

umm... okay??

nacht:tbh after seeing this comment and reading chapter one and finding what mc name is, I really tempted to review bomb this fanfic with one star, but since I'm not in my mood then I'm not doing it.
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Socksniffer
SocksnifferAuthor

I mean, no offence or something but... yeah, that sounds great! You can go ahead then and write your own ff.

SAURON_:this is my only complaint why him being a uchiha if he has a system like honestly i rather him be like might guy
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Rogue_Nin
Rogue_NinLv4

Kanye uchiha

Socksniffer:giving me extra work eh? Almost had me there
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SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

i know it wasn't a jab its just every naruto fan-fic has the mc being an uchiha i am all for it but he has a system which would balance the whole dang unfairness of them

Socksniffer:I mean, no offence or something but... yeah, that sounds great! You can go ahead then and write your own ff.
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Socksniffer
SocksnifferAuthor

All i'm saying is that, you have a great idea, go do something about, u wont know it might be a masterpiece.

SAURON_:i know it wasn't a jab its just every naruto fan-fic has the mc being an uchiha i am all for it but he has a system which would balance the whole dang unfairness of them
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SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

i know but i don't have enough time i starting an internship at a hospital and going to start college soon so yeah

Socksniffer:All i'm saying is that, you have a great idea, go do something about, u wont know it might be a masterpiece.
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

I thought this was just a funny post until i went and read the first chapter. Bro's name is legitimately Kayne.

Rogue_Nin:Kanye uchiha
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Rogue_Nin
Rogue_NinLv4

more like kanye 🤣🤣

FinnsRevenge:I thought this was just a funny post until i went and read the first chapter. Bro's name is legitimately Kayne.
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SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

yeah stories like that are unrealistic maybe if you have gacha but still not really

Defective_Angel:I guess he want your MC has multiversal power level at the beginning of story without any story behind that
Intense_Gaming_5908
Intense_Gaming_5908Lv4

i am giving this story a try just because of these comment from author and the readers.

JustTiredOfPicking
JustTiredOfPickingLv11

I haven't read this...and I already find you insufferable and annoying (that whole diva vibe ...ugh)...so respectfully fk you and have a nice day.

Socksniffer:umm... okay??
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