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2024-10-14 23:57

Other than a few spelling mistakes an some punctuation issues it's a good translation! Good job,Author![img=recommend][img=update]

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PuddingLord
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Thanks! I don't understand completely how so many mistakes are slipping by me as I use Grammarly to check my work.

Lucinda_Hacker
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I don't either but it's better than most novels here. Some write like they have no clue and can't or won't use Grammarly!

PuddingLord:Thanks! I don't understand completely how so many mistakes are slipping by me as I use Grammarly to check my work.
PuddingLord
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Thank you!

Lucinda_Hacker:I don't either but it's better than most novels here. Some write like they have no clue and can't or won't use Grammarly!
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