Ok, why is there no one reading this book? I pretty good with literally almost no plot holes that can be seen in other beast taming books, the mc is overpowered but isn’t truly overpowered. The flow pacing with detailed world building, this is amazing in many aspects. Apart from the cliche bad naming sense pun, this is gold!
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For me, it was because when I opened the table of contents, I saw the first nine chapter names, which made me believe they were all one chapter divided into nine parts. I came to the conclusion that chapters will most likely be short, which I dislike but not as much as breaking up a chapter into smaller pieces and posting them as chapters. New chapters, in my opinion, are typically used to change the setting and, on rare occasions, to build suspense through the use of creative tools such as cliffhangers and the like. However, dividing one chapter and posting it into multiple smaller chapters results in those chapters being in the same setting. Which, when reading, leaves me dissatisfied, which is why they are not my cup of tea.
Also pacing is super slow at times and many chapters feel like fillers. The MC is far, far from being OP. His system is OP, he is pathetic without it. No actual talent to speak of.
