The story is quite well written and if I’m Frank kinda shits on about 90% of beast novels off the bat, got a generous 88 chapters free to start and updates twice a day but it is fairly slow paced and the chapters are not the longest, as in by chapter 169, they still have not done the 2nd reranking which is supposed to be 3(?) months into college. I don’t really have another outright negative for the story and the story is a nice breath of fresh air having characters that have distinct personalities (including the women)(author please don’t fall into the act of making the women all one traited haram bait) and although the story has not moved forward a lot, the world building is quite solid in what we’ve learnt so far in comparison to how far the story has moved in time. Overall I enjoyed my time reading and hope you all do too!
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LIKEplease do, because i just wen to reread chapter 314 and 315 and there is no ntr (SPOILER ALERT) The only thing close to ntr in those chapter was in chapter 316 and here is the paragraphe ""Interesting." Roman's hand grazed hers under the pretense of reaching for his glass. Serena barely resisted the urge to pull away, her nails digging into her palm instead. "A free spirit, then. I like that. I also like to act…without any inhibitions." He said while placing one of his arms around her shoulder. Serena, lowered her head, but Kain could tell that she was mere seconds away from breaking the hand on her shoulder that was in danger of brushing a little too close to an unwanted area."" And thats the end of the interaction, she leave right after having succeded in her objectif of distracting the dude Also she's not even MC girlfriend, or anyones gf And the only thing close to ntr there is in the novel up to now is when we learn that one of the beast of one the the MC's customer (aka a random) has cheated on her beast partner with another beast...if thats the ntr you're talking about, nobody care
it's already confirmed that serena will be fml and THAT IS NTR
author deleted that part where he touched her thigh and she blushed
unless my understanding of ntr is different, there is none. First off Kain and Serena aren't dating.. there's mild interest at best at this point. Secondly they were undercover and Kain suggested light flirting just to distract dude enough to slip a split.. I'm curious how that constitutes as ntr, especially when dude was mind controlled to let Serena leave once they obtained their objective. The most that happened was light flirting.
and he touched her, not sure if author removed that part, but i have of the chapter where he touched her thigh and b
it's not exactly ntr, i agree with you (but the main problem is that the guy touched all over) NTR is when mc gets his partner stolen/is engaging in any sexual act with someone else
ok that's how I see it as well. The MC's partner/love interest basically cucks (or gets stolen from) him right in front of his eyes... my bad, I tend to be a literalist with certain word choices, but the guy was certainly harassing the FL. it's good that the author didn't let it drag out though.