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TheOneTrueLoki
TheOneTrueLokiLv145mth
2024-09-01 04:54

I have only read 90 chapters , so my feedback is only based on that. it's good so far no complaints. grammar is fine , pacing is alright, mc is a bit dumb and not that creative but he has potential and the fights are okay.

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ALeous623
ALeous623Lv12

how is this a spoiler? you didn't reveal anything

Mihai123
Mihai123Lv12

saying mc is dumb its by itself a spoiler, when u read and see him so dumb, u wont get surprised

DisenchantedReader
DisenchantedReaderLv14

Do you actually expect the MCs to be smart? Intelligence seems to be an exception for webnovels.

Mihai123:saying mc is dumb its by itself a spoiler, when u read and see him so dumb, u wont get surprised
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