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raizell24
raizell24Lv48mth
2024-09-04 09:23

interesting choice of original power (that didn't came from template) and plot advance, the way you portray marvel and it's character are also on point for me....the only thing that is disturbing is your mc in himself. you made him a villain just for the sake of it. or maybe this is how any of us would act given the same power? he goes around killing innocents like he is playing GTA...heck even while playing that game i've hardly killed as much as he does on single chapter. using blue, red and purple to destroy hundred of meters of buildings containing innocent familles just to show his power and feeds his ego? killing whole group of ingorants just because they found his actions dangerous for their families and life. and mc had no goal..just randomly killing people.people like villain character when they had a solide reason, charisma, and harm those who are mostly scums. but the ones who just kills others for fun? i don't think many readers like this type or it just me who is weird here

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John_2156
John_2156Lv3

Try this "Start as a Spiritual Planter: I have a Game panel"

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Oh, a farmer's novel, how I love you friend, I have read almost all the existing ones for a long time now and finding a new one makes me very happy. Thnx

John_2156:Try this "Start as a Spiritual Planter: I have a Game panel"
raizell24
raizell24Lv4

i will, thanks bro

John_2156:Try this "Start as a Spiritual Planter: I have a Game panel"
DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14

you're forgetting the factor that this is a translation, Asians literally kill people for no reason just because they either asked them a question or looked at them weird because the Mc is wearing some weird as shit.

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14

and the authors' portrayal of characters are so far off they might as well be oc's

raizell24
raizell24Lv4

in novels? yeah i know i've already been poisoned so much from those types, and if i know its just a translation i would ingore it because they are mostly trash.

DeejaeSutherland:you're forgetting the factor that this is a translation, Asians literally kill people for no reason just because they either asked them a question or looked at them weird because the Mc is wearing some weird as shit.
Rheizz
RheizzLv14

not Asians bro it's just Chinese. they're something gone senile.

DeejaeSutherland:you're forgetting the factor that this is a translation, Asians literally kill people for no reason just because they either asked them a question or looked at them weird because the Mc is wearing some weird as shit.
Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv5

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John_2156:Try this "Start as a Spiritual Planter: I have a Game panel"
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