a decent story but the author or MCs knowledge of Naruto is mostly based off of other fanfictions. he has no respect or knowledge of the OG. mostly knowledge gained from reading fanfics from biased idiots who make the 3rd hokage the enemy, which makes every story suck. Other than that, the grammar is at a child's level. It doesn't feel natural, especially dialogue. it lacks a certain emotional quality and smoothness, almost like a robot takes over at times. finally, I found it very annoying having to hear the nickname "old man" or "uncle" 50 to 60 times a chapter. no name should be used that much each chapter. the plot is cool tho.
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well I used to think I had quite a decent knowledge of Naruto (watched it twice) also Hiruzen will not be a villian here ๐
