Hey guys, here are images of our main characters. I hope you like them! These are images of their childhood. I will also update their mature forms later when the story has progressed to a certain point. **** Please leave a review about your experience in the review or comment section. **** Yomi

It was a good read until chapter 81, where everything went to hell. It’s by no means the best Naruto fanfiction I’ve read, but it was enjoyable, if we overlook the fact that it introduced Senju characters from some unknown place, knowing that the only Senju is Tsunade. Setting aside the main female character, who seemed to support something in the story, I really thought she would die and trigger the Sharingan, but that was fine. Everything changed with chapter 81; he was steadfast in his decision not to join that clan for too many plausible reasons, but one damn meal made him change. Ugh, what a huge disappointment. I can’t say if it gets better later, but we know that his ideals and convictions are made of paper.

in my personal opinion this novel would be much better in the femal lead wasnt intoduced right away and if she wasnt a o.c she serves no purpose and the communication between them is a lil cringe, but i do love the idea of the M.C and am trusting the auhor and his vision i will tag along for the ride and hope it gets better.

Very good book. it was an unexpected find, it was low in ranking but i decided to give it a try and to my surprise its a very steady book. the mc is slowly but surely developing into a powerful ninja. only thing is, its been 30 chapters and we dont have any goals other than becoming stronger to not get affected by timeline. my guy has been living for almost 2 years in ninja world and has no foolish ambitions....

The story is good i have no problems with it. The main character is likable, Yumi while annoying at times is great too. Ryota and Kiba is just perfect. The one problem with this fic that im experiencing is that the fic has shallow dialogue. The grammar is eh, not bad but can be improved on. If you dont understand what i mean by shallow dialogue i’ll give you an example (not related to the fic just a random example) Example: “Leave me alone, Mike. We aren’t a couple anymore.” “I say when the relationship is over.” Example 2: Claire frees her wrist from Mike’s grip, rubs it and says, “Leave me alone Mike. We aren’t a couple anymore.” He steps forward, forcing her back against the wall and hisses, “I say when the relationship is over.” The second example has action that gives more depth to the situation and this can be applied in combat too.

Kill the girl for ms 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈 it’s me again

I already read this novel it is fantastic🤘 please support our author-san. 🙏

10/5 super nice read so far most 200 chapter's looking foreword to more..............................................................................................................................................................[img=recommend]🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪

Seriously one of the best Naruto Fan fics easy 5/5 for me. Most of them dont bother changing things in the story like the Uchiha massacre. This one does and in a way that actually makes sense which was very refreshing. There are some info dumps early on that are boring but I just skipped them personally and im glad I kept reading as the start gets much better in later chapters.