It was a good read until chapter 81, where everything went to hell. It’s by no means the best Naruto fanfiction I’ve read, but it was enjoyable, if we overlook the fact that it introduced Senju characters from some unknown place, knowing that the only Senju is Tsunade. Setting aside the main female character, who seemed to support something in the story, I really thought she would die and trigger the Sharingan, but that was fine. Everything changed with chapter 81; he was steadfast in his decision not to join that clan for too many plausible reasons, but one damn meal made him change. Ugh, what a huge disappointment. I can’t say if it gets better later, but we know that his ideals and convictions are made of paper.
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A 13 year old boy, who was in hospital bed for most of his life, is not emotionally matured enough, and there many times when we people too choose such options which are illogical, but.... we still do anyway if you wanted a calculative Main character, than may be this was fanfic was not the right one for you, i hope you will like the other one I will right in the future though ^~^
Ok, first of all, if any oc characters other than the mc is a problem for you then the hell have you come to read a fanfic...go read the manga instead. 2nd, even though Tsunade was shown as the only senju in the series, it was never started that she was the LAST senju, heck she didn't even use the last name SENJU, only Tsunade. Moreover, one of the most popular theory behind no mention of other senju clan members are that Tobirama desolved the clan and the members married into civilians. So, there being other members of the clan in this fanfic is a very plausible situation, don't know why you would have any problem with it?? 3rd, because of Danzo, being an Uchiha in the village is already very tough. Now being a descendant of both a Senju and an Uchiha, that's just asking for trouble. So, even if there was many reasons why he didn't want to join the Uchiha clan, that was the most reasonable and safest choice for him. The fact that the one in Uchiha who wanted to take him in is the only person who cares for and supported for his mother from the clan names that choice even easier, a fact that he found around chapter 81. So yeah, one meal for that person should be enough for him, a KID who wants familiar affection, to change his decision and join the clan. So, for those who like me decides whether to read a story after reading comments, don't get misleaded and give it a read. It's one of the better Naruto fanfictions out in the sea
