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LightCloud9
LightCloud9Lv57mth
2024-09-26 23:40

I like your story, but please fix your system. What is the point of your extra stat points if you can just increase them by being active. It is Obsolete.

As A GAMER In One Piece

SpiritFest13
3.9
55 Chs

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SpiritFest13
SpiritFest13Author

extra stat points is basically a permanent boost during an intense fight. for example, If current MC fought Arlong, he would mostly lose, but with the extra stats coming in clutch, along with MC's IQ, He might be able to get the win. stats points are mostly used to power up the MC faster.

7mth
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LightCloud9
LightCloud9Lv5

Doesn't that make the suspension cancelled out because of the backup plan that the advesary can't even never stop? The system can't be touch otherwise you make it. Shit is rigged at that point, and if the main character is getting jumped, he is just being stupid. Like, how are you getting jumped when you have everything laid out for you.

7mth
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SpiritFest13
SpiritFest13Author

A SHAMELESS REVIEW ... FROM MYSELF OFCOURSE... for serious though, This story is good .... in my opinion... hell, this story works due to my opinions.... so, check it out....

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Milpy
MilpyLv5

Couldn't get into it. Multiple chapters written in bold. Filling the necessary word count: Word word word word word word word word word word

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Spirit0090
Spirit0090Lv4

MY MAN'S WORK... SHIT IS AS AWESOME AS ALWAYS... though, I didn't expect you to start doing One Piece... I never saw it myself, but i am gonna.. since I ain't understanding anything even when searching in Google. keep it up my Man... or Else

9mth
Harume_V2
Harume_V2Lv5

How will you make this work I wonder? The stats are gonna be confusing for you

9mth
Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv5

I’d say that this is about 30% fanfic and 70% crack fiction… there is so much breaking the fourth wall in this it’s not even funny. Don’t get me wrong I love a good gamer fiction and I like the detail that went into describing the stats and skills, but this story doesn’t really seem to take itself seriously enough to be readable in the long term.

6mth
stay_dog12
stay_dog12Lv14

currently, I am enjoying your work, and I hope you continue

9mth
Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

The MC is unlikeable, he also kept spoiling the Strawhats. Author also milked every chance he gets to increase word count. "GAMERS MIND ACTIVATED" has been used in every other MC's mono/dialogue. The Stat Sheets are 1/4 of every chapter's word count. World Background was mid, for starters GAMERS MIND is quite useless. In fact it doesn't seem to exist at all.

6mth
Andrew_maconha
Andrew_maconhaLv3

One of the things I like most about this story is that it's not 100 percent focused on the protagonist, the characters have a personality here not only to complement the story, Many of the stories are 100% focused on the MC when they speak, generally to praise the MC or follow what he says, and it is very common to make the characters dumber so that the protagonist stands out, Not stupid like Luffy, I'm talking about the kind of stupid guy who can't do anything alone and always has someone telling him what to do.which doesn't make much sense, I can't imagine Luffy following orders just because a "friend" said so, this story has a lot of personality 👍 (I just think the sexual jokes are a bit exaggerated, this part seems like those serious ones from adult cartoons, like Moral Orel or Rick Morty)

8mth
Daoist4vVVLN
Daoist4vVVLNLv1

I LOVE IT,AND WANT MORE. AUTHOR PLS GIVE MORE CHAPTERS. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

9mth
Praise_TheSun
Praise_TheSunLv4

Very good novel and no simp MC a plus gor me [img=update][img=update][img=update]

8mth
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