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2024-08-31 19:24

One of the things I like most about this story is that it's not 100 percent focused on the protagonist, the characters have a personality here not only to complement the story, Many of the stories are 100% focused on the MC when they speak, generally to praise the MC or follow what he says, and it is very common to make the characters dumber so that the protagonist stands out, Not stupid like Luffy, I'm talking about the kind of stupid guy who can't do anything alone and always has someone telling him what to do.which doesn't make much sense, I can't imagine Luffy following orders just because a "friend" said so, this story has a lot of personality 👍 (I just think the sexual jokes are a bit exaggerated, this part seems like those serious ones from adult cartoons, like Moral Orel or Rick Morty)

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SpiritFest13
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well, One piece is an adult universe, dumbing it down to teenagers. matters like Sexual experiences such as R$pe, hinted between Doffy and Voila, Celestial dragons and the Hancock sisters etc. i am just bring some of them into light, however small it is.

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All right, but don't exaggerate too much, otherwise the protagonist starts to look like a pre-teen who just discovered a swear word and keeps saying it all the time because he thinks it's cool to swear.

SpiritFest13:well, One piece is an adult universe, dumbing it down to teenagers. matters like Sexual experiences such as R$pe, hinted between Doffy and Voila, Celestial dragons and the Hancock sisters etc. i am just bring some of them into light, however small it is.
SpiritFest13
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well, it depends on the context. i use swear words infront of my friends, and i want MC to do the same thing, age has nothing to do with swear words anyways.

Andrew_maconha:All right, but don't exaggerate too much, otherwise the protagonist starts to look like a pre-teen who just discovered a swear word and keeps saying it all the time because he thinks it's cool to swear.
SpiritFest13
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facts. in india, we swear about our families, so its common honestly.

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