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2024-08-29 08:17

Couldn't get into it. Multiple chapters written in bold. Filling the necessary word count: Word word word word word word word word word word

As A GAMER In One Piece

SpiritFest13
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53 Chs

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SpiritFest13
SpiritFest13Author

thanks a lot actually. i went to the previous chapters and have now edited it as much as possible. so, you could check it out if possible.

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SpiritFest13
SpiritFest13Author

A SHAMELESS REVIEW ... FROM MYSELF OFCOURSE... for serious though, This story is good .... in my opinion... hell, this story works due to my opinions.... so, check it out....

8mth

Spirit0090
Spirit0090Lv4

MY MAN'S WORK... SHIT IS AS AWESOME AS ALWAYS... though, I didn't expect you to start doing One Piece... I never saw it myself, but i am gonna.. since I ain't understanding anything even when searching in Google. keep it up my Man... or Else

8mth
Harume_V2
Harume_V2Lv5

How will you make this work I wonder? The stats are gonna be confusing for you

8mth
Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv5

I’d say that this is about 30% fanfic and 70% crack fiction… there is so much breaking the fourth wall in this it’s not even funny. Don’t get me wrong I love a good gamer fiction and I like the detail that went into describing the stats and skills, but this story doesn’t really seem to take itself seriously enough to be readable in the long term.

5mth
stay_dog12
stay_dog12Lv14

currently, I am enjoying your work, and I hope you continue

8mth
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

The MC is unlikeable, he also kept spoiling the Strawhats. Author also milked every chance he gets to increase word count. "GAMERS MIND ACTIVATED" has been used in every other MC's mono/dialogue. The Stat Sheets are 1/4 of every chapter's word count. World Background was mid, for starters GAMERS MIND is quite useless. In fact it doesn't seem to exist at all.

5mth
Andrew_maconha
Andrew_maconhaLv3

One of the things I like most about this story is that it's not 100 percent focused on the protagonist, the characters have a personality here not only to complement the story, Many of the stories are 100% focused on the MC when they speak, generally to praise the MC or follow what he says, and it is very common to make the characters dumber so that the protagonist stands out, Not stupid like Luffy, I'm talking about the kind of stupid guy who can't do anything alone and always has someone telling him what to do.which doesn't make much sense, I can't imagine Luffy following orders just because a "friend" said so, this story has a lot of personality 👍 (I just think the sexual jokes are a bit exaggerated, this part seems like those serious ones from adult cartoons, like Moral Orel or Rick Morty)

7mth
Daoist4vVVLN
Daoist4vVVLNLv1

I LOVE IT,AND WANT MORE. AUTHOR PLS GIVE MORE CHAPTERS. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

8mth
Praise_TheSun
Praise_TheSunLv4

Very good novel and no simp MC a plus gor me [img=update][img=update][img=update]

7mth
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