Leylin_Blackwood

You've blitzed through the fic, any opinions? A review perhaps?

It's a pity it hasn't been updated >:p

Umm… not to be rude, as I like the fic so far, can you slow your roll with posting chapters? You make good shit, but to me it was clear that you used some chat GPT to brush up the chapter, which is obviously something you did so that you could post an extra one in time. Honestly, keeping your word is a good thing, but if it comes at a cost for writing performance, then I can’t be happy about it. You’ve shown you can write, and I just hope you take your time, rather than using GPT again in the future. Let me put it this way: You can cook, just don’t hire a shity sous chef, so that you can dish out more meals. GPT just makes a lot of works feel soulless in my opinion, so I hope that you take a more sedate peace, and continue to crank out good shit!

Not really, the Clock Tower’s rules are very flexible depending on whose family you are a part of. Lorelei is known for being incredibly unreasonable and strict, willing to kill anyone at the drop of a hat. So Alistair, being the heir apparent to the family acting as the Clock Towers Land Lord, he’d be able to get away with close to anything, his mother being the only real person who would be able to punish him. The Director being a distant second and the Barthomelloi being a close third. And seeing as Alistair had the other persons consent to fight them, he is therefore doubly not in the wrong, so there is nothing Rosalind can really blame him for in accordance with the rules. Naturally she can say it was unbecoming of him, but that is a different thing.

Bro, learn to put your add at the very end. It is distracting and off putting for the reader, and it makes the idea of actually joining your patreon less appealing with the way you are marketing it. Just put it in the end, and let people enjoy the story, by doing so more might actually consider joining, as the way you place your two adds comes across as an annoying add that pops up on the centre of your screen.

Meh, you might be right, but I try to air on the side of caution, as I don’t want to be burnt accidentally. Plus, my horrendous dyslexia tends to work against me, so if GPT changes anything else, it would probably go over my head.

Chat GPT confirmed, not like it wasn’t obvious to begin with, but this just feels lazy… I encourage you to try to rely less on this, as it is too much like a crutch, and one which many can see and look down on. Pro tip: Use GPT to fix the chapter or a portion of it, and then brush up on the parts where the AI has embellished it, so as to make it look more natural. If you do that long enough, you should be able to stop using it. And if you’d like it to fix grammar and spelling errors without changing your text, just ask for it to point them out, and give suggestions to fix them. Then it won’t change your work, but you’ll need to manually fix it.

First, thank you for the comment, along with the review, I’ll add a personal message to it later. But onto the questions! Yes, the Grail is cleansed! Practically getting a good scrubbing thanks to pulling out Anfrage Mainyu in his entirety. But with the whole ‘anti-hero’ thing, that is still possible, as while the Grail is ‘clean’, damage has been done, and it’s system is rather faulty. Morgan is going to eventually do some damage control on it, when things settle down in a year or two, as she is going to try to ensure that the system gets enough ‘juice’ to start a new war in 11 years. So she’ll just be making sure that it is otherwise operational, though she’ll probably concede the the ‘anti-hero glitch’ is more of a ‘feature’ rather than something that needs to be fixed, as it is thanks to that that she was summoned. The second question is a bit more interesting… The answer is ‘No’, or at least that is for him right now, but after his training which he is eluding to do, he’ll be a bit more tempered. Though he’ll have some help on Morgan’s end with coming up with ways to ensure that his revenge is as good as possible. Meaning that instead of being angry and bloodthirsty, he’d be something more similar to someone impaitaint and excited for the next War, as he and Morgan would have stirred the pot enough for it to be exciting to look forward to. On the whole blaming himself part, he’ll get some surprise help from our little princess, which should help shine a bit on her past, and give her some more depth to her character. Now, that is all I will say, and please have a great day, and I hope to see you in the comment section when I start posting again!

Thank you so much for the kind words! I am very much looking forwards to seeing you when Vol.3 drops, and I hope I continue to meet your standers then. But for now, have a great day, and thank you for taking some time out of your day to write me a review!

Heir to the Blacksmith, if I’m not mistaken. Good fic for the most part, and for your question, it will take a while before you see any true flexing on her part.