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2024-08-18 19:26

So I have read The Fractured World's almost till the end. It remains the last two chapters. So I will say this. Let me first state what I don't really like about it. The author uses quote to indicate yells. I don't know but when you are reading the story and they someone yell, you tend to imagine the sounds themselves. Once I see arrrghh. I be like i was imagining yeeee damn it! But seriously it somehow halts the flow of imagination at times. Now for the proper spitting. Adam isn't necessarily a likable MC, other than the fact that he has distinctive features, he isn't someone anyone can feel pity for or something. I don't know why, maybe because we now know he gets essentially powerful sha. He is just a good character so. Yes. Let's move to the man, the myth the legend. Marshall Matthew Bates. Probably the most well written character in the series. He has this jovial and nonchalant way of doing things. It's so cool. The story itself revolves around humanity reaching a type two civilization and are now able to harness power from their star system confidently. However as it would seem poverty and all as not yet been eradicated and there seems to be a cursed apocalypse on them. The entire thing features actual real Life beliefs and talks vastly about the Christian theology. Which is fantastic. I love how omnipotence omnipresence and omniscience was broken down. I mean even with my foresight I didn't see that coming. But well. It was cool. I will give this a proper rating of 1-10 1 being Electron and ten being LOTM It stands at a 8. Well written and easily lovable.

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