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2024-07-24 21:27

Hello, a shameless review from the author himself. While I am aware that a lot of readers prefer fast-paced books, I have to remind you that eloquence takes time. So, I have strived to create a balance. While the book might seem quite slow to ease into, I have included a lot of enjoyable scenes that will keep you glued, till the crazy stuff starts. I would implore you to get to chapter 10 of the book, then decide if you want to keep following or drop. Thank you, and I hope we complete this journey together.

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