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Viktor_Abatan
Viktor_AbatanLv28mth
2024-07-20 17:59

The MC is so relatable, ngl. That was what drew me in at the first chapter. The pacing and progression is insane. It's only been 11 chapters, but I feel for the MC already. It was also easy to connect to the other characters. Let's not begin with the fluid description 😌. The balanced blend of sci-fi and magic. Such a sweet read. If you haven't read this, you're missing a lot.

Fractured World: Sages Of The Future

A_Withering_Tree
4.8
39 Chs

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A_Withering_Tree
A_Withering_TreeAuthor

Hello, a shameless review from the author himself. While I am aware that a lot of readers prefer fast-paced books, I have to remind you that eloquence takes time. So, I have strived to create a balance. While the book might seem quite slow to ease into, I have included a lot of enjoyable scenes that will keep you glued, till the crazy stuff starts. I would implore you to get to chapter 10 of the book, then decide if you want to keep following or drop. Thank you, and I hope we complete this journey together.

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Athens_Pen
Athens_PenLv1

Malevolence cooked with this fr... I love the concept of a futuristic world and how you put it together. I also love how unique it feels, not copied or cliche-d

8mth
The_Renouncer
The_RenouncerLv3

So I have read The Fractured World's almost till the end. It remains the last two chapters. So I will say this. Let me first state what I don't really like about it. The author uses quote to indicate yells. I don't know but when you are reading the story and they someone yell, you tend to imagine the sounds themselves. Once I see arrrghh. I be like i was imagining yeeee damn it! But seriously it somehow halts the flow of imagination at times. Now for the proper spitting. Adam isn't necessarily a likable MC, other than the fact that he has distinctive features, he isn't someone anyone can feel pity for or something. I don't know why, maybe because we now know he gets essentially powerful sha. He is just a good character so. Yes. Let's move to the man, the myth the legend. Marshall Matthew Bates. Probably the most well written character in the series. He has this jovial and nonchalant way of doing things. It's so cool. The story itself revolves around humanity reaching a type two civilization and are now able to harness power from their star system confidently. However as it would seem poverty and all as not yet been eradicated and there seems to be a cursed apocalypse on them. The entire thing features actual real Life beliefs and talks vastly about the Christian theology. Which is fantastic. I love how omnipotence omnipresence and omniscience was broken down. I mean even with my foresight I didn't see that coming. But well. It was cool. I will give this a proper rating of 1-10 1 being Electron and ten being LOTM It stands at a 8. Well written and easily lovable.

7mth
Nova_Wright
Nova_WrightLv1

Sincerely speaking as a Nigerian brother I'm proud of this author he's a real Gee. The books's content is actually a fantastic one. i praise the word usage and the awesomeness . The author has shown maturity and complete skill in handling this masterpiece. This book is a testament to a curious but yet intriguing mind of a creative author. Kudos to a refined author.

8mth
odogwu_d_wise
odogwu_d_wiseLv13

usually I don't read sci-fi novels, but with this book the author had effectively captured my interest. Yes it's sci-fi, but even as you can see from the synopsis there are elements of fantasy and mystery, genres I absolutely love. He has woven this concepts together in a captivating manner, and it has honestly left me wanting more. There is potential in this novel and I sincerely hope it achieves it. Wanna know if you should go ahead and read it I say jump right in, its worth it.

8mth
David_Volpir
David_VolpirLv2

My Sensei delivered. That's why he's the goat

8mth
SonicScribe
SonicScribeLv2

well well well, I just read the synopsis only and I already know this is going to be a long and interesting ride, let's see what we have here🤌

8mth
menace_9737
menace_9737Lv1

all hail malevolence 🗿🗿 🤌🏼 haven't read it yet but all ready know it'll be epic 🤌🏼

8mth
David_Reg
David_RegLv2

Got hooked right from Chapter 1. Can’t wait to see how the story unfolds. This is brilliant. Love it

8mth
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