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DetachedDreamerLv147mth
2024-07-31 23:46

Love the author but when the MCs actions lead to his parents dying i gotta subtract a star. Ignoring the fact that its been overused immensely, the MC also little memory of canon. His parents dying were due to his own error and to change literally nothing even when he reacted. just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. idk just felt forced and generic. other than that a decent story.

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That's fair enough. Thanks for the review, and hopefully you will stick around to see how much canon derailed, which spoiler alert, is A LOT.

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