Item: The Daily Life of the Demon King
Rating: 4.4
Author: Jordzfml

JordzfmlLv46mth

2024-09-14 08:16

honestly i'm seeing alot of improvement passed the 10th chapter mark. keep up the good work author , add a little more details when explaining and try not to repeat the same sentence twice , i noticed in chapter 11 when goddess of the forge asked for an explanation the same lines were repeated , i don't know if it was a mistake or not but try not to let it happen often [img=proud]

The Daily Life of the Demon King

GreedHunter

4.1

286 Chs

Liked by 2 people

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JordzfmlLv4

mannn the chapters are so long i keep mixing them up 😭 , chapter 9 * was where the repeat took place , i swore i crossed the 10 chapter mark... i still saw alot of improvements from the 4th-8th tho 👍👍

6mth

GreedHunterAuthor

Well, this is my first experience and gradually I try to add more details when talking or describe the place where they are, if you read further, you might notice this

6mth

GreedHunterAuthor

This is the first time I've seen someone complain about the length of chapters. This is a first for me.

Jordzfml:mannn the chapters are so long i keep mixing them up 😭 , chapter 9 * was where the repeat took place , i swore i crossed the 10 chapter mark... i still saw alot of improvements from the 4th-8th tho 👍👍

6mth

JordzfmlLv4

nah i wasn't complaining , i was just stating why i kept mixing up the amount of chapters (it felt like i had already read 2 chapters when it was only one) , which is not a bad thing [img=Speechless]

GreedHunter:This is the first time I've seen someone complain about the length of chapters. This is a first for me.

6mth

GreedHunterAuthor

Well then I'm glad you enjoy reading🤔

Jordzfml:nah i wasn't complaining , i was just stating why i kept mixing up the amount of chapters (it felt like i had already read 2 chapters when it was only one) , which is not a bad thing [img=Speechless]

6mth

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