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Jordzfml
JordzfmlLv47mth
2024-09-14 08:16

honestly i'm seeing alot of improvement passed the 10th chapter mark. keep up the good work author , add a little more details when explaining and try not to repeat the same sentence twice , i noticed in chapter 11 when goddess of the forge asked for an explanation the same lines were repeated , i don't know if it was a mistake or not but try not to let it happen often [img=proud]

The Daily Life of the Demon King

GreedHunter
4.1
321 Chs

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Jordzfml
JordzfmlLv4

mannn the chapters are so long i keep mixing them up 😭 , chapter 9 * was where the repeat took place , i swore i crossed the 10 chapter mark... i still saw alot of improvements from the 4th-8th tho 👍👍

7mth
GreedHunter
GreedHunterAuthor

Well, this is my first experience and gradually I try to add more details when talking or describe the place where they are, if you read further, you might notice this

7mth
GreedHunter
GreedHunterAuthor

This is the first time I've seen someone complain about the length of chapters. This is a first for me.

Jordzfml:mannn the chapters are so long i keep mixing them up 😭 , chapter 9 * was where the repeat took place , i swore i crossed the 10 chapter mark... i still saw alot of improvements from the 4th-8th tho 👍👍
7mth
1
Jordzfml
JordzfmlLv4

nah i wasn't complaining , i was just stating why i kept mixing up the amount of chapters (it felt like i had already read 2 chapters when it was only one) , which is not a bad thing [img=Speechless]

GreedHunter:This is the first time I've seen someone complain about the length of chapters. This is a first for me.
7mth
GreedHunter
GreedHunterAuthor

Well then I'm glad you enjoy reading🤔

Jordzfml:nah i wasn't complaining , i was just stating why i kept mixing up the amount of chapters (it felt like i had already read 2 chapters when it was only one) , which is not a bad thing [img=Speechless]
7mth
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GreedHunter
GreedHunterAuthor

I decided to leave a review for myself because, as a friend of mine once said, "If you don't praise yourself, no one else will." So, I decided to praise myself for starting to write instead of just lying around and suffering from the heat. This is an ordinary story about the everyday life of a person in a fantasy world. There won't be a main character who constantly struggles and gets beaten up only to win through the power of friendship. No, the hero of this story will win instantly just because he can.

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JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4

Taking the Webnovel criteria, this book's score is 3.8 for me... and I'll explain why! firstly, it is the quality of the writing, which in the first chapters is quite bad but improves as the chapters go on (obviously it did not reach an optimal level, which is why I gave it 4 stars)... the second point is the development of the story which I didn't see any real writing plan, and I feel that the author is a little lost besides things that don't make sense like Hephaestus trusting a mortal to show his cursed eye, or her not being able to see at least the properties of the Yamato sword! and the third point is character development, which I didn't feel any development in the MC or anyone in the story, in addition to the fact that we often follow some clichés from other stories like attacking Bate Loga for example

10mth
Bierbart
BierbartLv14

Writing quality and the premise of the story are good. sadly we have a wimpy and soft edgelord as an mc which ruins the characters and the story development... too much drama and beta edgelord behaviour...

9mth
Artemisix_01
Artemisix_01Lv13

so I've read until the og Mc bell is being gender bent (ima leave for that) but my question is, is this harem if so ⬇️

7mth
Aayush_storms
Aayush_stormsLv4

Thanks for finally making a straightforward reincarnation danmachi fic with good mc for that you deserve 5 stars.

10mth
AusyLust
AusyLustLv12

A frustrating read…I think the story would be better if the mc was replaced, his character is at best the typical average op edgy Isekai character. I wish he was either a full-on hero, anti-hero, or fucken villain. I don't think he can be classified as any, his character is too inconsistent, or better to phrase it as the situations he's put in aren't handle well, making it feel forced and overly dramatic. I like idea of the story tho

2mth
Dao_leader
Dao_leaderLv4

Writing Quality is very good 5⭐, story development is average 3⭐, Character design 0⭐, Updating stability 3⭐, world Background 2⭐. For the main problem MC was to much cringe. The title is about Demon King but the reality was downgraded slave

6mth
jaro_onody
jaro_onodyLv3

good concept but at its core the fic is so boring .good enough if you have noting els to read.......................................................................................................

8mth
Ranandh
RanandhLv4

My Evaluation for this fanfic, if you want read novel with Very-OP main character and medium character development, then this fic is the best for you. Or if you want fanfic with weak-to-strong MC with complexity of Character development after that, well this fic not suitable for you. Also this fic have Harem genre with MC godlike-template, so this fic really have ending like villain face-slapping, almost of all-ending. but this fic definitely not boring one. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3mth
akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

mc is strongest with power of Anos and lots of face slapping and harem.

8mth
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