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GreedHunter
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2024-07-10 06:47

I decided to leave a review for myself because, as a friend of mine once said, "If you don't praise yourself, no one else will." So, I decided to praise myself for starting to write instead of just lying around and suffering from the heat. This is an ordinary story about the everyday life of a person in a fantasy world. There won't be a main character who constantly struggles and gets beaten up only to win through the power of friendship. No, the hero of this story will win instantly just because he can.

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DaoistxGACri
DaoistxGACriLv4

harem?

GreedHunter
GreedHunterAuthor

Maybe yes

DaoistxGACri:harem?
DaoistxGACri
DaoistxGACriLv4

I think it will become harem because the way MC behaves in front of different girls, it looks like he wants to become their lover.

DaoistxGACri
DaoistxGACriLv4

so author make it harem HAHAHAH

GreedHunter
GreedHunterAuthor

Anything is possible, because only Alex knows what he wants (mysterious smile)

DaoistxGACri:I think it will become harem because the way MC behaves in front of different girls, it looks like he wants to become their lover.
Solaris1267
Solaris1267Lv4

You have an amazing friend, God bless you and your friend.

Theory18
Theory18Lv4

i hope this harem, if you can please make alfia in harem too

GreedHunter
GreedHunterAuthor

Is this a girl from the Hermes family?

Theory18:i hope this harem, if you can please make alfia in harem too
Theory18
Theory18Lv4

aunt of bell, from hera familia in past, if i'm not wrong

GreedHunter: Is this a girl from the Hermes family?
GreedHunter
GreedHunterAuthor

she seems to have a husband if I remember correctly, and he is also a member of the Zeus family

Theory18:aunt of bell, from hera familia in past, if i'm not wrong
Theory18
Theory18Lv4

make it AU, her fate in original too tragic, she's strong but got illness and death

GreedHunter:she seems to have a husband if I remember correctly, and he is also a member of the Zeus family
GreedHunter
GreedHunterAuthor

"This is already an AU, and while Belle is Bella, we still need to reach certain moments. As for Alfia, I practically know nothing about her, except that she's a member of Zeus's family and one of the survivors of the battle with the dragon, and that she's poisoned by the dragon's venom."

Theory18:make it AU, her fate in original too tragic, she's strong but got illness and death
wolfgod223
wolfgod223Lv14

Is it confirmed that it's a harem or not?🤔

GreedHunter:"This is already an AU, and while Belle is Bella, we still need to reach certain moments. As for Alfia, I practically know nothing about her, except that she's a member of Zeus's family and one of the survivors of the battle with the dragon, and that she's poisoned by the dragon's venom."
Ronin46
Ronin46Lv4

Zald is not her husband more like a close friend she sees like a brother. Alfia was in a few words kinda nevrotic as all héll if she didn't like you then she would Kill you for even speaking if she in The dungeon. She was called devil talent because she got eidetic kinesthesia which allowed her to replicate any movements she had seen even only once making her able to become the greatest swordswoman to ever live the only problem was her sickness which made her body fragile so she chose to be a mage and even then she is still Op

GreedHunter:she seems to have a husband if I remember correctly, and he is also a member of the Zeus family
BeardedBullfrog
BeardedBullfrogLv4

I’d it’s a harem, awesome. More importantly though, are there lemons? Because as Jack Reacher says “details matter.”

GreedHunter
GreedHunterAuthor

Sorry buddy, but I feel complete disgust when I think about writing Lemon. I don't know why, but maybe it has to do with those authors who spend several chapters on it. And instead of reading Lemon, it's better to watch hentai or hentai manga.

BeardedBullfrog:I’d it’s a harem, awesome. More importantly though, are there lemons? Because as Jack Reacher says “details matter.”
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JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

so have you finally decided its Harem? If not then Id like for you to take down the tag because it is misleading and will upset people who have expectations

GreedHunter:Sorry buddy, but I feel complete disgust when I think about writing Lemon. I don't know why, but maybe it has to do with those authors who spend several chapters on it. And instead of reading Lemon, it's better to watch hentai or hentai manga.
GreedHunter
GreedHunterAuthor

Dude, in chapter 0 the members of the harem are indicated, I made this chapter especially for this

JRCaste:so have you finally decided its Harem? If not then Id like for you to take down the tag because it is misleading and will upset people who have expectations
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

Thank you for your services then good soldier.

GreedHunter:Dude, in chapter 0 the members of the harem are indicated, I made this chapter especially for this
BeardedBullfrog
BeardedBullfrogLv4

Well that’s your opinion, can’t fault you for that. But as far as reading lemons, they make stories feel more complete. When you describe big battles, you use details, when you describe the surrounding worlds or environments, you use details, when you describe your characters appearances or personalities, you use details. In my opinion, every story becomes great or incredible if the author utilizes what I call the 5 L’s. They’re the emotions you should be feeling while reading a story of any kind. These L’s fully encapsulates the spectrum of emotion. They’re Laugh, Lament, Loathe, Love & Lust. Every great story I’ve ever read included all 5, so for you to just use a weak cop out, or excuse for laziness, you’re really diminishing the potential of your story. Nobody says you need to write out smut. But like Jack Reacher says, details matter. Just being a bit descriptive in an intimate setting really changes everything. Hell even if you copy and paste from some other novel and just insert your story’s names, who cares. But details matter. So if you just skip a potential lemon scene or just “next day” it, you’re really hurting your story on the long run. Otherwise if you aren’t going to include the details, why even write the MC being intimate with someone. And if you remove intimacy then the story lacks. Anyway, hope you change your outlook on future works. Later

GreedHunter:Sorry buddy, but I feel complete disgust when I think about writing Lemon. I don't know why, but maybe it has to do with those authors who spend several chapters on it. And instead of reading Lemon, it's better to watch hentai or hentai manga.
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