I decided to leave a review for myself because, as a friend of mine once said, "If you don't praise yourself, no one else will." So, I decided to praise myself for starting to write instead of just lying around and suffering from the heat. This is an ordinary story about the everyday life of a person in a fantasy world. There won't be a main character who constantly struggles and gets beaten up only to win through the power of friendship. No, the hero of this story will win instantly just because he can.
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LIKE"This is already an AU, and while Belle is Bella, we still need to reach certain moments. As for Alfia, I practically know nothing about her, except that she's a member of Zeus's family and one of the survivors of the battle with the dragon, and that she's poisoned by the dragon's venom."
Is it confirmed that it's a harem or not?🤔
Zald is not her husband more like a close friend she sees like a brother. Alfia was in a few words kinda nevrotic as all héll if she didn't like you then she would Kill you for even speaking if she in The dungeon. She was called devil talent because she got eidetic kinesthesia which allowed her to replicate any movements she had seen even only once making her able to become the greatest swordswoman to ever live the only problem was her sickness which made her body fragile so she chose to be a mage and even then she is still Op
Sorry buddy, but I feel complete disgust when I think about writing Lemon. I don't know why, but maybe it has to do with those authors who spend several chapters on it. And instead of reading Lemon, it's better to watch hentai or hentai manga.
so have you finally decided its Harem? If not then Id like for you to take down the tag because it is misleading and will upset people who have expectations
Well that’s your opinion, can’t fault you for that. But as far as reading lemons, they make stories feel more complete. When you describe big battles, you use details, when you describe the surrounding worlds or environments, you use details, when you describe your characters appearances or personalities, you use details. In my opinion, every story becomes great or incredible if the author utilizes what I call the 5 L’s. They’re the emotions you should be feeling while reading a story of any kind. These L’s fully encapsulates the spectrum of emotion. They’re Laugh, Lament, Loathe, Love & Lust. Every great story I’ve ever read included all 5, so for you to just use a weak cop out, or excuse for laziness, you’re really diminishing the potential of your story. Nobody says you need to write out smut. But like Jack Reacher says, details matter. Just being a bit descriptive in an intimate setting really changes everything. Hell even if you copy and paste from some other novel and just insert your story’s names, who cares. But details matter. So if you just skip a potential lemon scene or just “next day” it, you’re really hurting your story on the long run. Otherwise if you aren’t going to include the details, why even write the MC being intimate with someone. And if you remove intimacy then the story lacks. Anyway, hope you change your outlook on future works. Later