I decided to leave a review for myself because, as a friend of mine once said, "If you don't praise yourself, no one else will." So, I decided to praise myself for starting to write instead of just lying around and suffering from the heat. This is an ordinary story about the everyday life of a person in a fantasy world. There won't be a main character who constantly struggles and gets beaten up only to win through the power of friendship. No, the hero of this story will win instantly just because he can.

Taking the Webnovel criteria, this book's score is 3.8 for me... and I'll explain why! firstly, it is the quality of the writing, which in the first chapters is quite bad but improves as the chapters go on (obviously it did not reach an optimal level, which is why I gave it 4 stars)... the second point is the development of the story which I didn't see any real writing plan, and I feel that the author is a little lost besides things that don't make sense like Hephaestus trusting a mortal to show his cursed eye, or her not being able to see at least the properties of the Yamato sword! and the third point is character development, which I didn't feel any development in the MC or anyone in the story, in addition to the fact that we often follow some clichés from other stories like attacking Bate Loga for example

Thanks for finally making a straightforward reincarnation danmachi fic with good mc for that you deserve 5 stars.

good concept but at its core the fic is so boring .good enough if you have noting els to read.......................................................................................................

Writing quality and the premise of the story are good. sadly we have a wimpy and soft edgelord as an mc which ruins the characters and the story development... too much drama and beta edgelord behaviour...

honestly i'm seeing alot of improvement passed the 10th chapter mark. keep up the good work author , add a little more details when explaining and try not to repeat the same sentence twice , i noticed in chapter 11 when goddess of the forge asked for an explanation the same lines were repeated , i don't know if it was a mistake or not but try not to let it happen often [img=proud]

On chapter 71. An interesting mc who just wants to live in peace and it's interesting to watch his development. The development of the plot is interesting, there is no stupid following the canon, but unexpected events may occur and there will be consequences from them, it will not seem like a filler. And an interesting development of the surrounding characters. I hope that it will continue to be cool, and the fic will not be abandoned.

Honestly very good book, it has of funny good laugh moments that fit in and can take you off guard which make it all the more enjoyable! - 10/10 keep up the good work 👍🫨

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