I decided to leave a review for myself because, as a friend of mine once said, "If you don't praise yourself, no one else will." So, I decided to praise myself for starting to write instead of just lying around and suffering from the heat. This is an ordinary story about the everyday life of a person in a fantasy world. There won't be a main character who constantly struggles and gets beaten up only to win through the power of friendship. No, the hero of this story will win instantly just because he can.

Taking the Webnovel criteria, this book's score is 3.8 for me... and I'll explain why! firstly, it is the quality of the writing, which in the first chapters is quite bad but improves as the chapters go on (obviously it did not reach an optimal level, which is why I gave it 4 stars)... the second point is the development of the story which I didn't see any real writing plan, and I feel that the author is a little lost besides things that don't make sense like Hephaestus trusting a mortal to show his cursed eye, or her not being able to see at least the properties of the Yamato sword! and the third point is character development, which I didn't feel any development in the MC or anyone in the story, in addition to the fact that we often follow some clichés from other stories like attacking Bate Loga for example

so I've read until the og Mc bell is being gender bent (ima leave for that) but my question is, is this harem if so ⬇️

Writing quality and the premise of the story are good. sadly we have a wimpy and soft edgelord as an mc which ruins the characters and the story development... too much drama and beta edgelord behaviour...

good concept but at its core the fic is so boring .good enough if you have noting els to read.......................................................................................................

mc is strongest with power of Anos and lots of face slapping and harem.

To up the rating lol. keep up the good work author.

Writing Quality is very good 5⭐, story development is average 3⭐, Character design 0⭐, Updating stability 3⭐, world Background 2⭐. For the main problem MC was to much cringe. The title is about Demon King but the reality was downgraded slave

honestly i'm seeing alot of improvement passed the 10th chapter mark. keep up the good work author , add a little more details when explaining and try not to repeat the same sentence twice , i noticed in chapter 11 when goddess of the forge asked for an explanation the same lines were repeated , i don't know if it was a mistake or not but try not to let it happen often [img=proud]