Item: A Gunslinger’s System in a World of Magic
Rating: 1.8
Author: Lestda

LestdaLv154mth

2024-11-02 19:49

Overall just a fanfiction of rdr2 with magic, the development is junk in the purest way. The fact that the guns are plain useless is totally a call for drop for a novel with a Gunslinger as MC, the Mc is another issue, he's been carry for the others chars and can't see the previous live personality. The lack of ingenuity to much the genres are the big issue about this novel, hit that take 7 dmg in the shoulder or hits that put the mc in 1of35 hp just ruins the constance and logic of a plot, is more than obvious that the author is an amateur that don't put the points where has to be. Disappointing at least.

A Gunslinger’s System in a World of Magic

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LestdaLv15

I think the comments in the rating here are for friends bc don't make sense at all, well maybe the lack of comments put some tips of what is going on.

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Kotik_KotikLv5

for God's sake please proofread before you hit post this shit is painful

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